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I'll be here Daddy

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Suzanne
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0 posted 04-06-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for Suzanne   Email Suzanne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suzanne

I'll be here daddy

don't you want to hear what I did daddy?
don't you want to hear about my day?
arn't you coming to my game tonight daddy?
arn't you and I going to play?
why don't you have any time daddy?
why do you have to leave right now?
I cant play by myself daddy
I need you to show me how
did I make you this mad daddy?
did I make you throw and yell?
maybe its those beers daddy,
maybe thats whats putting you through hell
I miss the way you used to be daddy
I miss the hugs you used to give
I want to hear you say I love you daddy
I want to see you live the way you used to live
I hope things get better for you daddy
I hope things turn out okay
I know they will one day daddy
I'll be here waiting for you on that day


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1 posted 04-06-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for Witch's Brat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Witch's Brat

You have my prayers, Suzanne--and so does your father.

WB


 I am a disturbed person, and I write about disturbed people. ~Tennessee Williams
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2 posted 04-06-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Suzanne, I am touched by your work. You have my prayers also--I hope that things will settle down soon...God bless you.

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

Aimster
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3 posted 04-06-2000 11:13 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

-Suzanne

You have my prayers as well. This was a very expressive poem. I hope things turn up for you...life has a way of doing that. Just keep the faith. Take care and God Bless!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
 
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