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Suzanne
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 18
Florida

0 posted 2000-04-06 10:17 PM


I'll be here daddy

don't you want to hear what I did daddy?
don't you want to hear about my day?
arn't you coming to my game tonight daddy?
arn't you and I going to play?
why don't you have any time daddy?
why do you have to leave right now?
I cant play by myself daddy
I need you to show me how
did I make you this mad daddy?
did I make you throw and yell?
maybe its those beers daddy,
maybe thats whats putting you through hell
I miss the way you used to be daddy
I miss the hugs you used to give
I want to hear you say I love you daddy
I want to see you live the way you used to live
I hope things get better for you daddy
I hope things turn out okay
I know they will one day daddy
I'll be here waiting for you on that day



© Copyright 2000 Suzanne - All Rights Reserved
Witch's Brat
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since 1999-09-17
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1 posted 2000-04-06 10:39 PM


You have my prayers, Suzanne--and so does your father.

WB


 I am a disturbed person, and I write about disturbed people. ~Tennessee Williams

Elizabeth
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2 posted 2000-04-06 10:55 PM


Suzanne, I am touched by your work. You have my prayers also--I hope that things will settle down soon...God bless you.

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-04-06 11:13 PM


-Suzanne

You have my prayers as well. This was a very expressive poem. I hope things turn up for you...life has a way of doing that. Just keep the faith. Take care and God Bless!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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