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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2000-04-06 06:52 PM


To those of you who take the time to read and reply to this, I thank you! I am sorry if I seem to be on a Mom theme these days. With graduation and other things coming up in the near future...she is on my mind a lot lately. Thanks again.

Love ya,
AMY


Six Years Before…Six Years After
By: Amy M. Kennedy
~ In loving tribute of my mom, Linda Kennedy

Six years before you came into my life
I had another family, lived at another place
Though I don’t really remember much
A memory here, perhaps the occasional face

Then things went bad, and I was forced to leave
Left the home I knew
Said good-bye to the woman I called “Mom”
Wiped away all traces of tears with the corner of my sleeve

Six years I lived without you
Not knowing what lay in store for me
About to be blessed with an angel
Six years before any of this would ever come true

Then you came into my life like a dream
The Lord brought us together… it was fate
I needed you as much as you needed me
You healed my heart, seam by seam

Days of laughter and sunshine rays
Mother and daughter sharing an unbreakable bond
You taught me practically everything I know
Unconditional love you gave me through those days

Then a dark cloud came and settled over me
The Lord took you away to his kingdom
Pain tore at my heart, almost forcing me to give in
Tears streamed down my face at night, could hardly see

Now it’s been six years since the day you went up above
Graduation is coming, I wish that you were here
I know you’ll be with me in spirit, tucked away in my heart
When I cross the stage I’ll look up to heaven with tears of love

Now my life is different, but I’m happy once again
Has been a long hard road that I have traveled
However I know all things happen for a reason
And when I miss you, I look into my heart where you lie…within

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 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~


[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 04-06-2000).]

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-04-06 07:26 PM


Then you came into my life like a dream
The Lord brought us together… it was fate
I needed you as much as you needed me
You healed my heart, seam by seam

Days of laughter and sunshine rays
Mother and daughter sharing an unbreakable bond
You taught me practically everything I know
Unconditional love you gave me through those days

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amy-girl, you are precious.
sweetie, dont feel like you should apologize for your poems reasons...
you dont need to, ever...
this is so moving and so perfect.
I dont pretend to understand the reasons, nor do I have any answers to the why of these things...all I know is how we learn and grow and live our lives after a loss...is the TRUE one way we honor them and pay them tribute...how we live our lives in their light...that is the measure of their love.
that being said...KNOW as I do...she is so very proud and so very pleased.
you shine in her light Amy...you are her success story.
take care my sweets
love ya, jm

bboog
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 303
Valencia, California
2 posted 2000-04-06 07:32 PM


Aim~
  Had time to read one more and chose this one. Am glad I did, too. Very nice. I'm sure that your mother would be very proud of you and your writing talent.
best regards,
bboog

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2000-04-06 08:42 PM


your poem was sad but beautiful, I am glad that it ended on a happy note...and I feel God places people in our lives to help us cope with our loss, (not to replace) but to be that someone to lean on. If I was your mom I would be very proud of you, not just your poetry, but the love you have and compassion.I'm sure she is smiling

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


Denise
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4 posted 2000-04-06 09:17 PM


This is so beautifully touching, Amy. I'm sure she is smiling down on you and very proud of the person that you are.

Denise

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5 posted 2000-04-06 09:19 PM


Amy~
Your feelings are very natural, hon.
When you walk across that stage and
get your college diploma ... know that
your mother is pleased for you and her
spirit lives in your heart.
Honest emotions need no apologies.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
6 posted 2000-04-06 09:49 PM



Amy*
You are an angel walking on the ground sweetie!!!  I have never FELT such beautiful writing.  God bless you with a load full of Angel Wing Hugs!!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2000-04-06 11:50 PM


Aimster,
        I know exactly how you feel. . .my father died when I was 10, and I going through all the things that a teenager goes through was pretty hard sometimes, but I just knew in my heart that he was proud of me and that I had done well. . .

And I know that your mom is very proud of the things that you have done, for graduating and making your life better. . .this was a wonderful poem and you are a wonderful person. . .

Much love and strength to you, my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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