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Dying in your arms

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vandana
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0 posted 04-06-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Iam crying for you,
Iam dying in your arma,
I have yu,
you have me,
As I die in your arms,
Makes me to coming back to you,
What you got is far,,
Beyond compare,
When I die in your arms,
your love comes over me,
I can't describe
how I feel
to bee in your arms,
Hold me,
As I feel cold,
Don't let my heart go from you,
As I lay down in your arms,
Cover with the sweet kisses,
Rock me on and on,
You whisper me softly
in my ears,
I want to close my eyes,
Feel your love one mine,
love me all the night,
slipping into dreams,
I have to make,
I feel your love
surround my soul,
hold me in yoyr arms,
Cover me with the sweet kisses,
rock me on and on,
you're the one I care deeply,
You're the one ,
I came running for your comfort,
I die into your arms,
everytime I fall for you
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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 04-06-2000 06:36 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Wonderful title! And a very passionate poem from you, vandana.
Good work
Liz
Mike
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2 posted 04-06-2000 08:40 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nicely done Vandana... enjoyed.
Tara Simms
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3 posted 04-06-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

This is so beautiful and heartfelt!  
Denise
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4 posted 04-06-2000 09:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sounds like love to me!  

Denise
Alwye
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5 posted 04-06-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Definitely very passionate!  Well done, very beautiful!  

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~
JamesMichael
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6 posted 04-09-2000 01:16 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"Cover me with the sweet kisses..rock me on and on." this is very lovely.  James
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7 posted 04-09-2000 02:08 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

-vandana

very romantic...passionately sweet. take care!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
 
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