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I Broke Out In Love

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Marge Tindal
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I Broke Out In Love
~*Marge Tindal*~

I broke out in love
all covered with you.
I hope itís contagious
and you catch it too.

Itching to scratch
each little spot.
Hoping you come down with
exactly what Iíve got !

No inoculation.
No cure in sight,
Iím covered with love
on this very night.




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-06-2000 01:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ahhh, this is wonderful Marge! I hope the whole world catches it!!!  

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This is cute! Too bad love isn't really contagious.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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Marge, you got the bug alright...keep it, it's good for you!
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4 posted 04-06-2000 03:17 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Marge, this is absolutely adorable!  Does this go along with spring fever?    I hope it's contagious too, cause I've got somethin' similar!  

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
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5 posted 04-06-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

There are some things that don't need a cure.
Love is one of them.  However, Love does make you want to scratch, if you catch my drift. (sheepish grin)




 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
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6 posted 04-06-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RAM

Marge.   This is precious.  

Was it Ogden Nash who wrote,

"I think that man is very rich
who has a scratch for every itch." ?

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7 posted 04-06-2000 07:02 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

Well if this is the disease they call love, I do believe I'm covered from head to toe!!! G* You do wonders with your words Marge...keep me smilin girly!!!!

 Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always


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8 posted 04-06-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

Ahh, Marge what a sweet poem. You always find a way to make even the most simplest or complex thing in life unique with your words and imagination. I only wish that I could catch what you have!    Enoyed this very much!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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Denise~
Yeah ... an epidemic would be nice !
At my lunch break today at work, I sat
under the 'musing tree' and started
sneezing .. a co-worker asked me if I was allergic .. I commented that I must
be ... I just broke out in love !
Just HAD to pen it !
Thanks, gal.

LoveBug~
Ahhhhhh ! But I think it may be !

Martie~
Ohhhhh, soooooo gooooood !

Satiate~
See !  You've got it too !
It MUST be contagious !  

Danny~
SCRATCHING FURIOUSLY !  

Rick~
Could have been a Nash-ism.
Thanks for liking.

Amber~
YOU GO GIRL !

Melissa~
It IS contagious !
Come sit under the 'musing tree' with me !
~*Marge*~




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10 posted 04-06-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

love is itchy,sticky, messy, fun, spontaneous, exotic, it is well worth the clean up of ones heart...the fun is making the messes....

I wish THE lovebug(not refering to Lovebug on here at passions)would bite me...so I could breakout and itch!hahaha!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

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11 posted 04-06-2000 09:03 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

marge-

i enjoyed reading this one thoroughly. i want to catch whatever you have as well! maybe i'll go sit under that musing tree?! You have such a way with words! This was lighthearted and fun yet still held the same poetry that I've come to know and love from you!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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Oh Marge!!!! This is GREAT!!!!! I love it!!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

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Hey, Marge, for you I've got the hots
So bad that I break out in spots
That cover me from head to toe
And come with fever, don't you know?

The docs say that they are not sure
But they don't think there is a cure
For this strange malady I've got
That makes my blood so very hot.

It could be terminal, I think.
Spots on my cheeks are rosy pink
My face is flushed...I'm prone to sweat
So much each night my pillow's wet!

My heart beats fast. My nerves are frayed
My skin looks like pink lemonade.
If this keeps up, dear Marge, I'm sure I'll
Have to get an epidermal!!!


So I don't know how you selected
Me to be the one infected
But here I am, a hopeless case
Just because I saw your face.



[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 04-07-2000).]
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It's spreading--I'm breaking out too! This is so sweet, Marge.

Balladeer--you better behave! If you don't, we may have to send you over to Adult.  

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

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RomanticHeart~
Here's hoping you catch it too !

Amy~
Come on down .. plenty of room under
the 'musing tree'.

ButterfliesDC~
I like that 'lovebug' graphic.
Look ... he's even got a net.

Balladeer~

Oh my gosh,
I reckon that you
have got a bite of
that bug too.

Goodness, gracious,
sakes alive ...
Hope you don't
break out in hives !

When your blood
is pumping that hot
I'm not sure
it's LOVE you've got.

Find a doctor
that you trust.
I think he'll diagnose ...
a bad case of LUST !  

Quite different from love,
that's for sure.
The good news is
there's a quicker cure !

Better not go into
the treatment on this page,
or it might throw the readers
into a rage.

Take two asprin
That's not an insult ...
If that doesn't work
I'll meet you in ADULT !


Elizabeth~
My stars !
There's an epidemic for sure !  
LOL at that Adult Balladeer !
~*Marge*~




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16 posted 04-14-2000 08:06 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

It's true, love is contagous only I am immune, and if not immune just can't spread it, snapy little poem, very cute and a nice way of looking at love, because the symtoms are painful .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
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Covered in Love...sounds wonderful  
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AngelSwing~
Oh, sweetie ... glad you liked this.
Love is a beautiful thing to
break out in ... it's the cure that
is painful.  

Hoot~
Hey ... thanks lady.
~*Marge*~


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