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I Broke Out In Love
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I Broke Out In Love |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Broke Out In Love ~*Marge Tindal*~ I broke out in love all covered with you. I hope it’s contagious and you catch it too. Itching to scratch each little spot. Hoping you come down with exactly what I’ve got ! No inoculation. No cure in sight, I’m covered with love on this very night. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhh, this is wonderful Marge! I hope the whole world catches it!!!  Denise |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is cute! Too bad love isn't really contagious. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, you got the bug alright...keep it, it's good for you! |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Marge, this is absolutely adorable! Does this go along with spring fever?  I hope it's contagious too, cause I've got somethin' similar! May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
There are some things that don't need a cure. Love is one of them. However, Love does make you want to scratch, if you catch my drift. (sheepish grin) A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Marge. This is precious. Was it Ogden Nash who wrote, "I think that man is very rich who has a scratch for every itch." ? Rick |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
Well if this is the disease they call love, I do believe I'm covered from head to toe!!! G* You do wonders with your words Marge...keep me smilin girly!!!!  Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ahh, Marge what a sweet poem. You always find a way to make even the most simplest or complex thing in life unique with your words and imagination. I only wish that I could catch what you have! Enoyed this very much!Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Yeah ... an epidemic would be nice ! At my lunch break today at work, I sat under the 'musing tree' and started sneezing .. a co-worker asked me if I was allergic .. I commented that I must be ... I just broke out in love ! Just HAD to pen it ! Thanks, gal. LoveBug~ Ahhhhhh ! But I think it may be ! Martie~ Ohhhhh, soooooo gooooood !  Satiate~ See ! You've got it too ! It MUST be contagious ! Danny~ SCRATCHING FURIOUSLY ! Rick~ Could have been a Nash-ism. Thanks for liking. Amber~ YOU GO GIRL ! Melissa~ It IS contagious ! Come sit under the 'musing tree' with me ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
love is itchy,sticky, messy, fun, spontaneous, exotic, it is well worth the clean up of ones heart...the fun is making the messes.... I wish THE lovebug(not refering to Lovebug on here at passions)would bite me...so I could breakout and itch!hahaha! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marge- i enjoyed reading this one thoroughly. i want to catch whatever you have as well! maybe i'll go sit under that musing tree?! You have such a way with words! This was lighthearted and fun yet still held the same poetry that I've come to know and love from you! AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Oh Marge!!!! This is GREAT!!!!! I love it!! Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Marge, for you I've got the hots So bad that I break out in spots That cover me from head to toe And come with fever, don't you know? The docs say that they are not sure But they don't think there is a cure For this strange malady I've got That makes my blood so very hot. It could be terminal, I think. Spots on my cheeks are rosy pink My face is flushed...I'm prone to sweat So much each night my pillow's wet! My heart beats fast. My nerves are frayed My skin looks like pink lemonade. If this keeps up, dear Marge, I'm sure I'll Have to get an epidermal!!! So I don't know how you selected Me to be the one infected But here I am, a hopeless case Just because I saw your face. [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 04-07-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
It's spreading--I'm breaking out too! This is so sweet, Marge. Balladeer--you better behave! If you don't, we may have to send you over to Adult.  Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RomanticHeart~ Here's hoping you catch it too ! Amy~ Come on down .. plenty of room under the 'musing tree'. ButterfliesDC~ I like that 'lovebug' graphic. Look ... he's even got a net. Oh my gosh, I reckon that you have got a bite of that bug too. Goodness, gracious, sakes alive ... Hope you don't break out in hives ! When your blood is pumping that hot I'm not sure it's LOVE you've got. Find a doctor that you trust. I think he'll diagnose ... a bad case of LUST ! Quite different from love, that's for sure. The good news is there's a quicker cure ! Better not go into the treatment on this page, or it might throw the readers into a rage. Take two asprin That's not an insult ... If that doesn't work I'll meet you in ADULT ! Elizabeth~ My stars ! There's an epidemic for sure ! LOL at that Adult Balladeer ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
It's true, love is contagous only I am immune, and if not immune just can't spread it, snapy little poem, very cute and a nice way of looking at love, because the symtoms are painful . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Covered in Love...sounds wonderful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AngelSwing~ Oh, sweetie ... glad you liked this. Love is a beautiful thing to break out in ... it's the cure that is painful. Hoot~ Hey ... thanks lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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