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touched by love

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weaubleau
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0 posted 04-06-2000 09:51 AM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for weaubleau



i felt something in my heart tonight
that i cannot explain...
i was overjoyed to hear your sweet voice,
but also filled with pain...

i was overflowing with happiness
because you opened your heart to me...
no more pretending to be so "tough",
tonight you cried for me.

just knowing i was on your mind
as each tear flowed down your cheek,
filled me with hope, and yet despair,
so much that i couldn't speak.

i wanted to be there to kiss your lips
and to wipe your tears away,
i wish i had been there just to hold you,
like i want to everyday.

my heart felt something special tonight,
now i'm thinking that someday i could,
say that same four lettered l-word
that i swore i never would...

© Copyright 2000 steven - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 04-06-2000 12:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so beautiful, Weaubleau! Very lovely! Welcome to Passions!

Denise
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Hi Weaubleau,

Commitment is a very hard thing some times but when its right all will flow effortlessly. This is a wonderful poem maybe you should show your friend it.

Cerenity
 
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