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Thoughts Of Love Among The Stars
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Thoughts Of Love Among The Stars |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Thoughts Of Love Among The Stars Peering out into the darkness seeing only dimly lit stars my mind drifts openly dreaming of loves gate. I have ventured into loves realm before, but not finding that in which has stolen my heart completely and without regret I still possess the need to venture. To define love and give it meaning at this point is impossible for how could you if you can’t feel or see it until it is upon you. Love is not some thing you can just go fetch as a whim to suit your fancy, for you will forever be looking in the wrong places. To carry an open heart and no judgment is of great impotence for to set limits on that which has never been concord is of no avail. Love is so elusive and wonders on its own Power which has not been tapped dry by any human thus far so as to own it you will not. The chances of finding true love is as the stars in the ski and as different as night and day for the individual. My search has been of no avail, but my dreams I do have owner ship of and will never give in to the fact that I have not of yet been successful. So I sit with my dreams among the stars and patience is my virtue, toward loving he that will steal and take completely that in which is mine my heart. By, Cerenity For some reason I think something is wrong with this, but I can't figure it out if you know please tell me. Thank you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Love will come your way with such a beautiful attitude as portrayed in this poem! Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Denise, Love has come my way it just is not the way I want it or dreamed it would be and I feel stuck right now. Thank you for your kind words. Cerenity |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Nothing at all wrong with this, sweetie. It seems to be speaking your heart ... and that's a good thing !  'Love is not something you can just go fetch as a whim to suit your fancy, for you will forever be looking in the wrong places.' Amen .. it comes when you least expect to see it enter your life. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is such a beautiful title for a poem. and the poem did it justice. Very lovely thoughts Liz |
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ElektraXOXO Junior Member
since 2000-04-07
Posts 30San Antonio Tx |
Just one word " LOVELY " |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
I enjoyed it very much! It was a lovely piece that spoke from your heart. If that is what it does, there is nothing at all wrong with it. "It is in our aloneness that we recognize our oneness, even as the single droplet of water knows also that it is the sea."Daniel *Cassie Roseen* |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge Liz Elektra Dawn Eclipse This was one of those sit down at the keyboard and just start typing ones, and this is how it came out, so I guess it is straight from the heart. Thank you so much for your words of kindness, Cerenity |
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