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Thoughts Of Love Among The Stars

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Cerenity
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Thoughts Of Love Among The Stars


Peering out into the darkness seeing
only dimly lit stars my mind drifts
openly dreaming of loves gate.

I have ventured into loves realm before, but
not finding that in which has stolen
   my heart completely and without
  regret I still possess the
need to venture.

To define love and give it meaning
at this point is impossible for how
could you if you canít feel or
see it until it is upon you.

Love is not some thing you can just
go fetch as a whim to suit your
fancy, for you will forever be
looking in the wrong
places.

To carry an open heart and no judgment
is of great impotence for to set limits
on that which has never been
concord is of no avail.

Love is so elusive and wonders on its own
Power which has not been tapped dry
by any human thus far so as
to own it you will not.

The chances of finding true love is as
the stars in the ski and as different
as night and day for the
individual.

My search has been of no avail, but my
dreams I do have  owner ship of and
will never give in to the fact
that I have not of yet
been  successful.

So I sit with my dreams among the stars
and patience is my virtue, toward
loving he that will steal and
take completely that in
which is mine my
heart.


By,  Cerenity


For some reason I think something is wrong with this, but I can't figure it out if you know please tell me.  Thank you.

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Denise
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1 posted 04-06-2000 11:54 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Love will come your way with such a beautiful attitude as portrayed in this poem!

Denise
Cerenity
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Hi Denise,

Love has come my way it just is not the way I want it or dreamed it would be and I feel stuck right now. Thank you for your kind words.

Cerenity
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Cerenity~
Nothing at all wrong with this, sweetie.
It seems to be speaking your heart ...
and that's a good thing !

'Love is not something you can just
go fetch as a whim to suit your
fancy, for you will forever be
looking in the wrong
places.'

Amen .. it comes when you least
expect to see it enter your life.
~*Marge*~


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Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 04-07-2000 08:10 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This is such a beautiful title for a poem. and the poem did it justice.
Very lovely thoughts
Liz
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5 posted 04-07-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for ElektraXOXO   Email ElektraXOXO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ElektraXOXO

Just one word " LOVELY "
Dawn Eclipse
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6 posted 04-07-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

I enjoyed it very much!  It was a lovely piece that spoke from your heart.  If that is what it does, there is nothing at all wrong with it.  

 "It is in our aloneness
that we recognize our oneness,
even as the single droplet of water
knows also that it is the sea."Daniel

*Cassie Roseen*

Cerenity
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7 posted 04-08-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi

Marge  Liz  Elektra  Dawn Eclipse

This was one of those sit down at the keyboard and just start typing ones, and this is how it came out, so I guess it is straight from the heart.

Thank you so much for your words of kindness,

Cerenity
 
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