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Sepia Mountains And Valleys

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Marge Tindal
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Sepia Mountains And Valleys
~*Marge Tindal*~

Mountain veiled soft sepia tone
across distant horizons rise
towering from the base
clear up to the sky
reflected in the
valley snuggled
close in lap
of land
take
me
back to
the mountain
top so I can once
more stand and gaze
across the valley of this
great land Sepia hue of yon
mountain lost now from my view
take me again to the mountain top so
the valley once more comes into my view





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sometimes we appreciate the valley more when we can look at it with perspective, eh?

Nice one, Marge..
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Nan~
Yes, the valley looks lovely from the mountain top ... and the mountain top
so inviting from the valley floor.
Thanks for your comments.
~*Marge*~


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-Marge

As a mountain lover myself, I truly loved this one. Made me think of my times in western North Carolina...in the mountains. Thank you much for the memory. Beautiful imagery in this!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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I love this, Marge...such beautiful imagery!
....And so alive with longing.
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margie-girl...you did it again...another beautiful, perfect poem...and as always...
with your creative and imaginative presentation.
perfect.
take care, jm

 The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
vertical horizon

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Beautiful  
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Beautiful perpectives in this, Marge!

Denise
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Amy~
Thank you.  I also love the mountain range of which you speak.

Martie~
Thank you, sweet lady.
Yes, the ~spirit~ is being pulled
to the mountain.

JanetMarie~
Thank you again my friend.

Hoot~
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


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Hi Marge,

You always seem to take me on such beautiful trips and this one is so beautifully done.

Thank you my love,
Cerenity
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~Marge~
     You do have a way with words that touches the soul.  Love this one, too.   Have a great day!!!  And by the way, my friend loved "Soldier With Wings"!




 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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Beautifully done.  It is always so easy to feel your spirit and the spirit of nature in anything you grace us with.
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very nice.
it is well written with wonderful style.
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Cerenity~
You're welcome on any 'trip' I take.
Thank you.

TerryW~
You're a doll !
I'm pleased you let me know about 'Soldier'
Thank you.

Mike~
What a wonderful thing for you to say.
Thank you so much.
~*Marge*~


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A valley is only a valley if you're on the mountain. Great little poem
Liz
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This is a great piece! In fact, I wished that I could be there too, my friend!!

 Nathan
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Elizabeth, my friend~
Thank you.  The mountain often disappears
from view when you're standing on the top ..
and the valley beckons.  Then when in the valley ... so beckons the mountain.
I love the climb up and back down.

Nate~
I wish you were too, my friend.
So good to see you when you drop
in here.   Thank you for liking.
That makes me smile.
~*Marge*~


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Marge Tindal
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Weaubleu~
I missed you in there and certainly
didn't mean to.  Thank you for the
read and for the nice comment.
I'm pleased that you liked it.
Welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


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