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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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0 posted 2000-04-06 05:41 AM


Thank you so much, my friends, for your kind comments.

(After 24 hours, this poem self-destructs.)






[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 04-07-2000).]

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Pepper
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1 posted 2000-04-06 07:08 AM


Tender and soft words that linger in my mind ....
So very lovely Rosemary .....

 "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars."
_Les Brown_

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2 posted 2000-04-06 08:06 AM


Rosemary~
How pretty this is.
What a line this is ....

'The love in your eyes is as flickering
sunlight reaching slender hands
through golden poplars.'

LOL @ the 'closer'.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan
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3 posted 2000-04-06 08:09 AM


I sure hope it doesn't self destruct - It's a great poem - with a perfect title, btw..
Martie
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4 posted 2000-04-06 10:57 AM


Rosemary, this is a marvelous poem, so full of him and his wonderful love. Made me melt, it did.  You are both lucky!!
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 2000-04-06 12:11 PM


Glad I made it here in the time limit  
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2000-04-06 01:04 PM


Rosemary,
Good words, good thoughts, good poem.

Denise
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7 posted 2000-04-06 01:14 PM


This is very very beautiful, Rosemary!  

Denise

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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8 posted 2000-04-06 05:56 PM


I very deeply appreciate all your sweet comments on this.  Thank you so very much!
Nothing personal at all about its self-destruction - it's just that it's getting published.   But I wanted to share it with you guys first.



[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 04-06-2000).]

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