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amber
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since 06-15-99
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los banos, ca,


0 posted 04-06-2000 03:44 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber


Asking the wind so long ago,
All the answers that I should know,
Trapped inside, nowhere to go,
Just becuase I loved you so.

Somewhere beyond, where we stand,
Hearts secure, hand in hand,
Stars aligned inside the soul,
Overwhelmed, to much to know.

Falling free into your grace,
Your love such an awkward place,
Still lost in you without a trace,
My insecurities, now erased.

Kiss me soft, here and now,
As if not to wonder how,
Thoses vacant tears have washed away,
Everything I ment to say.

The crystal promises in your eyes,
The beauty in your hearts diguise,
Break down my souls last defense,
Satisfied with sheer rememberance.


 Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always


© Copyright 2000 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
lucky
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since 01-17-2000
Posts 1648
Idaho


1 posted 04-06-2000 04:58 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Amber

This is another for the "A" folder, you know that one..? It's where I get all my new ideas from. This one is really good. As my kids say... A-plus

Very Cute

 
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 08-26-99
Posts 1064
northern mountains, Idaho


2 posted 04-06-2000 05:29 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

What a tender, loving, haunting poem.  I know you to be the queen of haunting verses, but this one has a note of hope, and I love that.  You are an excellent poet, and my husband and I both love your work.

How do you get the meaning and rhyme to flow together so well?  When I try to get my meaning to rhyme, it loses its meaning and intensity.  When I try to get my rhyme to have meaning and intensity, it melts into mediocrity.  I guess I just don't have that gift.
Yet... for
I will never give up trying !!!!

Bravo for you, my friend!

amber
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since 06-15-99
Posts 246
los banos, ca,


3 posted 04-06-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

This is so purdy Ambs...Yep, we both know you're lost sis...lost in love I mean!!!

Love you!!!


 Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always


Denise
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4 posted 04-06-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Amber, this is absolutely beautiful! *sigh*

Denise
Danny Holloway
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5 posted 04-06-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Must agree with Rosemary.  Such nice work with the rhyme.
"Stars aligned inside the soul".  what great expression.
All so well done.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
amber
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Posts 246
los banos, ca,


6 posted 04-06-2000 08:04 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you all so much.

Lucky- you always seem to enjoy my work and i thank you deeply.

Rosemary- i honestly dont have an answer for you as much as i wish that i did. It seems to come from somewhere deep inside my soul and it just wraps itself together. I thank you deeply for your encouragement and your husband. I have missed you both very much.

dysynder- I always have your commemnts to look forward to, ever since my first day here, thanks so much.

Tanya- you posted under the wrong name by accident, people probably think i am nuts replying to mysefl. Well thats okay....I..knew that it was you.

danny- thanks so much i appreciate your taking the time to read and comment.
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7 posted 04-06-2000 08:36 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Amber~
It makes me happy to see the joy
in this poem.  I enjoyed your thoughts.

'Satisfied with sheer rememberance.'

Lovely, lovely line.

(I recognized Sis's ink ..
she was so enthusiastic ! )
~*Marge*~






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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8 posted 04-06-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry



This is beautifully written and written straight from the heart as all wonderful poetry is.  


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Ashley2314
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since 04-04-2000
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9 posted 04-06-2000 09:41 PM       View Profile for Ashley2314   Email Ashley2314   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ashley2314

This is so beautiful. The words go straight to your heart!
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