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take my hand

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weaubleau
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0 posted 04-06-2000 02:24 AM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for weaubleau


take my hand…
hold it…
let me know you care…
you can reach my heart…
with just a single touch…
please, just take my hand…

take my heart…
keep it…
it is yours already…
shape it with your love…
fill it with your happiness…
please, take my heart…

take me…
love me…
let me hold your hand…
let me open your heart…
let me make you smile…
please, take me…

take my love…
it’s the truest you’ll ever know…
i will never love another…
you’ll never need another…
i’ll be yours forever…
if you’ll only take my hand…

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1 posted 04-06-2000 02:33 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

This is a beautiful and warm hearted message.   Welcome.
Poet deVine
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2 posted 04-06-2000 06:25 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely sentiments...welcome to our family! Please check your email for a special greeting.  
Cerenity
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3 posted 04-07-2000 11:08 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Weaubleau,

This is beautiful, and it truly comes from your heart well done friend.
Welcome to passions

Cerenity
Denise
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4 posted 04-07-2000 01:30 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so beautiful! Very lovely!

Denise
weaubleau
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thank you all for your replies...

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