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Whispers..........

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Butterflies_dont_cry
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Whisper to Me

Whisper to me soft and low
Tell me what I am to give
Whisper in the soft moonglow
That my sins you will forgive

Whisper within nights sweet arms
What will fill your eyes with smiles
Whisper to me with your charms
A fight for love is worthwhile

Whisper and look into my eyes
That I bring a song to you
Whisper while stars fill the skies
That love is once again true

Whisper at the break of dawn
That I filled your dreams with sun
Whisper until your breath is gone
That our love song is not done


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

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mariee66
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1 posted 04-05-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

If only I could find that love to whisper to me~
Lovely poem~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


INclan
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2 posted 04-06-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Butterfly,

Nicely done.  Maybe a little cuddling to go with that whisper? I really enjoyed this.

INclan
Janet Marie
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3 posted 04-06-2000 12:16 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

OOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

oooohhhhhh mmmmyyyyyy sweet butterfly...
this is DIVINE... I see someones been whipsering in your ear too...(smile)
GIRL I LOVE this... it my most fav of yours...loooovvvve seeing this side of you.

certain words were put on this earth for poetry...whisper being one of them...butterfly being another...
love ya ss, jm


 The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
vertical horizon

EagleOne
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4 posted 04-06-2000 05:22 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

JM says some words were put on this earth for poetry.  I say some people were put here to weave those words, and you sweet butterfly are one. This is beautifully done!  

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien
Butterflies_dont_cry
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Marie* Ahhhhhh so do I!

INclan*  lol yes that always goes well with a whisper  

Eagle & J.M.* Thank you so much!!! Nope no whispering here maybe just some wishful whispering thinking...lol  And you are sooooooo right "whisper" is meant for poetry it sounds beautiful all by itself.

Ok so I'm blushing...and wishing I was as wonderful a weaver as you seem to think Eagle   ....who's been filling your head with these stories..lol But seriously, I am so touched by your comments you know how much it means coming from you. Forgive me I just had to lighten it up because it's always hard to accept words of kindness over words of critisism...I'm working on it...and you have been giving me lots of practice....lol **Angel Wing Hugs**


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Marge Tindal
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ButterfliesDC~
Well ... this is so soft and feathery
that it has to be a 'Whisper'.
I am one who also loves that word.
But right now I'm gonna shout ...
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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This is breathtakingly beautiful, Butterflies!

Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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Whispers? This shouts of love  
Martie
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Soft and sensual and love filled, this poem.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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Marge* Always my voice of encouragement...thank you for reading and thank you for your shouts...lol  

Denise* Thank you so much I'm so glad you liked it.

Hoot* Love is something that no matter how you say it....the end result is the same  

Martie* Thank you for reading and taking the time to reply.


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Aimster
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11 posted 04-06-2000 04:54 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Butterflies,

Girl...wow did this one touch my heart! You sure act like a woman in love to me hehe. This is definitely my favorite poem by you thus far. And yes you are right, the word whisper is so beautiful. Just the way it rolls off the tounge is almost like a whisper in itself. The Aimster stands in awe of you!! Take care and God Bless!

AMY        


 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Danny Holloway
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12 posted 04-06-2000 05:04 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Very nice writing.  Super job with the rhyme pattern.
JamesMichael
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Wonderful whispers...so it is whispers you women enjoy..I must keep this thought in mind the very next time.   Just having fun...I knew that.... James
Butterflies_dont_cry
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Amy* Thank you so much...poetry is a form of acting at times and release...lol  wishful whisper thinking...

Danny* Thank you for taking the time to comment and read, after reading your own beautiful poetry I'm touched that you liked mine.

Jmlee12345* Thank you    and if you need some more lines to use you just call me  


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Sven
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Butterfiles.. .
               shhhhhhhhhhh. . . do you hear that?  It's what I feel about your poem. . . it's *shhhhhhhh* wonderful. . .

The whispers in our lives are there to tell us things. . . if only we'd listen. . .

Beautiful my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

 
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