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Master of Verse (An acrostic for Danny H.)
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Master of Verse (An acrostic for Danny H.) |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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Delicate are his thoughts that swathe my mind Alluring are his words that pervade my ears, Never to truly know his poetic soul. Naked my senses become to his rhythmic tongue Yearning...yearning for one more verse. Ok, tell me you like it Danny... OR ELSE! ~~Marie~~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Something tells me he will, Marie... Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Do I like it??? How could I not??? You honor me with such wonderful words. I have received many responses to poems that i have written, but this poem has greater personal meaning than anything written previously. THANK YOU for making my day (as Clint would say) I'm smiling big time with this. What a fantastic line this is: "Naked my senses become to his rhythmic tongue". I must get busy and satisfy that yearning for more verse. I'm curious about the OR ELSE. Sounds intriguing! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
marie, this is so sensual and perfect...VERY nice...and if it inspires our danny-boy to write us more poems... then it's even better...he hasnt posted a new one in a bit... see Danny...ya got us ALL begging and drooling... (smile) beautiful poem marie, all joking aside The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well, I like it  |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Well, glad so many liked this!! I wasn't sure I could do this well enough... guess I succeeded! As for the OR ELSE Danny... I'll overload your inbox with email Pretty rotten, eh!?Of course, I'm sure I could come up with something better Marie "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Hey~ I've thought of a better or else... but since you like this, I'll save it for another time |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very nice verse for a very nice and talented poet Liz |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WHEW! Nice writing, Marie! I'm ready to change my name to Danny so I can pretend it's for me!!!  |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Liz~ Yes, what a wonderful poet he is~ Thanks for reading and liking~ Balladeer~ Hmm... ok, you're Danny-boy Now about that OR ELSE--he, he, he Really, thanks for your reply! Marie~ [This message has been edited by mariee66 (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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