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Master of Verse (An acrostic for Danny H.)

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mariee66
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0 posted 04-05-2000 11:07 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mariee66

Delicate are his thoughts that swathe my mind
Alluring are his words that pervade my ears,
Never to truly know his poetic soul.
Naked my senses become to his rhythmic tongue
Yearning...yearning for one more verse.

Ok, tell me you like it Danny... OR ELSE!
~~Marie~~  


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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1 posted 04-05-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Something tells me he will, Marie...

Elizabeth


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2 posted 04-06-2000 10:38 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Do I like it??? How could I not???
You honor me with such wonderful words.
I have received many responses to poems that i have written, but this poem has greater personal meaning than anything written previously.  
THANK YOU for making my day (as Clint would say) I'm smiling big time with this.
What a fantastic line this is:
"Naked my senses become to his rhythmic    tongue".
I must get busy and satisfy that yearning for more verse.
I'm curious about the OR ELSE.  Sounds intriguing!  
Janet Marie
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3 posted 04-06-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

marie, this is so sensual and perfect...VERY nice...and if it inspires our danny-boy to
write us more poems... then it's even better...he hasnt posted a new one in a bit...
see Danny...ya got us ALL begging and drooling... (smile)
beautiful poem marie, all joking aside

 The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
vertical horizon

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4 posted 04-06-2000 12:30 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Well, I like it  
mariee66
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5 posted 04-06-2000 01:30 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Well, glad so many liked this!!
I wasn't sure I could do this well enough... guess I succeeded!    

As for the OR ELSE Danny... I'll overload your inbox with email    Pretty rotten, eh!?
Of course, I'm sure I could come up with something better  
Marie


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


mariee66
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6 posted 04-08-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Hey~
I've thought of a better or else... but since you like this, I'll save it for another time  
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 04-08-2000 09:01 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Very nice verse for a very nice and talented poet
Liz
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WHEW! Nice writing, Marie! I'm ready to change my name to Danny so I can pretend it's for me!!!  
mariee66
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9 posted 04-08-2000 10:51 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Liz~
Yes, what a wonderful poet he is~
Thanks for reading and liking~

Balladeer~
Hmm... ok, you're Danny-boy  
Now about that OR ELSE--he, he, he  

Really, thanks for your reply!

Marie~


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