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SorrowsMystress
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up.

0 posted 2000-04-05 10:25 PM


Her eyes were made for crying
They withold a soul
Which screams of anger
They contain a window
Into a life
Which has shown her no mercy
They are mysterious, yet give her away
So well

Her eyes were made for crying
She cries for all of her burdens
She cries for others' sins
She weeps at the thought of losing
Anything she has


Her eyes were made for crying
They can show you her dispair
She can tell you she loves you
With just turning them towards you
She can say she hates you
With her wicked glare

Her eyes were made for crying
And that's just what she does
She cries all night and all day long
When will she run dry
When will the time come
That she can no longer cry?



 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath

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Alwye
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1 posted 2000-04-05 10:29 PM


Absolutely stunning...it is almost as if you've looked into my own heart...I truly loved this!  Keep up the great work.  

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

Elizabeth
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2 posted 2000-04-05 11:07 PM


Well done once again, SorrowsMystress. Sometimes I think my eyes wre made for crying as well...

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


mariee66
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3 posted 2000-04-05 11:51 PM


Those eyes weren't made for crying~
Put away those blues today~
Those eyes weren't made for crying~
Happiness will find you, I pray~

One day those clouds will break~
Have faith~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard



Cerenity
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4 posted 2000-04-06 01:34 PM


Hi SorrowsMystress,

WOW girl this is really good, you speak volums to me, I have never been able or granted the chance to turn off the fauset. Some times I think I was cursed with a life of proublems and have no right to happyness.  
I love the way you write, I look forward to your poetry.

Thank you,  Cerenity

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