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Broken Hearted (Once again)

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SorrowsMystress
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


0 posted 04-05-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SorrowsMystress

Of all the things you could have done
To hurt me, to break me
You had to go and do
Just what I never thought you would
I had my suspicions
I had my doubts
But I never thought I'd see the day
That I would figure this intent out
I know that there's someone else
I've seen and had the proof fall in my lap
You can't deny it any longer.
I can't bear to ask you why
Because I already know the response
"I don't know"
I've heard it a million times before
"I don't know"
Just a denial
You said you never wanted to hurt me
So why lie to me?
Why take me and bend me over
And rape my soul of it's dignity?
You tell me I shouldn't be the victim
You say I should trust in you
You say I shouldn't worry
Well, what else did you expect me to do?
I knew something was going on
I knew there was another
Why did you have to wait
Until I fell in love with you
To reveal the you that you knew you were
Why did you wait
For my heart to belong to you
To shred it apart
Like it was nothing..nothing...NOTHING TO YOU!
I would cry but the tears would be wasted
Like they have been many a times for you
You wouldn't care, it wouldn't make a difference
So I guess this means we're through
Or would you like to walk on me some more
Tell me you love me, it will never happen again
Tell me there's no one else,
Tell me you only have eyes for me
Well, you don't need your eyes to love another
You don't need your bed to be infatuated
You don't need me anymore
So why keep me around?
Why keep me bound
To your painful lies
why keep me here
When you know I'm in hell
Why keep me at all
When you know you feel nothing
nothing for me at all..........


 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath
© Copyright 2000 Kimberlee Jones - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
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1 posted 04-05-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Sorrows

I am almost at a loss of words. This was so poetically tragic. I could feel the emotions behind every word. Your pen captured all the feelings in your heart and soul. Beautiful work my friend! Simply beautiful and very sad!

AMY  

P.S. I hope your heart smiles again sometime soon.

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
dhuron
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2 posted 04-09-2000 05:10 AM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Sorrows,

This was very powerful. Full of anger and hurt. I am sorry this happened. Be strong and time shall heal.

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

JamesMichael
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3 posted 04-09-2000 05:31 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice writing...very vivid...you know I am going thru something very similar and I thought the most important issue is to take care of myself...what is important to me in a relationship..I decided it would be trust and admiration.  When this person who's name I will not mention had an affair I completely lost my trust and I certainly cannot admire her for that behavior...so nothing is left except the pain and the anger...and life must go on..and it took me a long time to accept this position.  Just my opinion...James
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State of constant confusion!


4 posted 04-09-2000 09:51 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

I know your pain all too well. Keep your chin up and true love shall find you. If only you believe.
                       Jeffrey
 
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