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Ladycat
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0 posted 04-05-2000 05:39 PM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat




I wish you saw me the way that I see me
Broken and worn with the days of before
I wish that you could look inside my heart
Feel the pain that I feel
I wish that there were more time for us
So you could see the way I bleed
I wish that you could understand
That Iím lonely inside my head
I wish that there were space for me
Somewhere in your heart
I wish that you were here with me
To share in the joy and that I feel
I wish that everything were as perfect as before
If I try I know that I can make it better
I wish that we were rich
Money beyond compare
I wish that I could make you happy
Just like before
I wish that your struggles would disappear
Vanish before your eyes
I wish to be your one and only
But wishes are like lies
No matter what I say or do
No matter how much I wish
I know that wish never come true
So Iíll have to just sit here and cry

Love,
Lady



 Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

© Copyright 2000 Vynette M. Charles-Brooks - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
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1 posted 04-05-2000 05:48 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

My dear friend, you do not post often enough.  You remember the old looney toons cartoons?...the one with the witch that cackles and then darts off, leaving only bobby pins behind?...yeah, that was me a minute ago when I saw your name gracing the forums (I was in such a hurry to read what you posted, and all!!).     (yeah, I'm a nut)

Athough I don't know what inspired this poem, I can honestly say right now that parts of it read as if you took them straight from my heart. Have you been reading my mind again, miss?  lol  Good to see you posting in here, don't let it go so long next time!!

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
Alicat
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2 posted 04-05-2000 07:55 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Satiate...I think I'll pass on the obvious comparison about Broomhilda *ROFL*  j/k  

Ladycat, my friend for many years, I can tell your hormones have been raging again....and through such rage have you produced a very poignant, heartfelt message, about time spent with a loved one, or the lack thereof.  Thank you for opening up, and for sharing this with us...It's been a very long time since last you posted.  

Alicat the Persnikitty  
Lone Wolf
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3 posted 04-05-2000 08:04 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Ladycat,

I think there is a time in all our lives that we wish we could recapture the past to forget the present.  Unfortunately, that hardly ever seems to happen.  Nice work.

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Nicole
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4 posted 04-05-2000 08:08 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Alastair...I have but 5 words for you, my friend...I know where you live  

*sniff*(you are so mean to me)
ROFL
Alicat
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5 posted 04-05-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

AAAACCKKKK!!!!  Time to head to them thar hills!!!

Um...Satiate...Ladycat just let me in on lil secret...um...this poem is not about her in the least....it's about us.    

Bad Ladycat...bad bad bad...*searches for a rolled up newspaper*    

Alicat, heading for the hills



[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 04-05-2000).]
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6 posted 04-05-2000 08:19 PM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

You two can fight face to face.. As for me.. I'm heading for the hills too and you can't be where I am.. I know that Satiate is going to come for the both of us soon..

Love,
Lady
Nicole
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7 posted 04-05-2000 08:21 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

ROFL  

Where on earth did I put my broom??
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8 posted 04-05-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Um..Satiate, I think it got busted when you cracked it over my noggin...       


Alicat, heading for the hills with broom pieces in his fur
Ladycat
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9 posted 04-05-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

Are you sure that she just cracked it over your head? hehe.. I'm too far away to see what happened it, but I'm sure that you are in more pain than that.. I'm glad that I don't live near either of you.. I would hate to wake up in the morning sore.. hahahaha..

Love,
Lady

Cat stay away from my hills..
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