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mystery
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0 posted 2000-04-05 01:11 PM



HOW SOON IS TOO SOON TO FALL IN LOVE?
BEEN WISHING ON THE STARS ABOVE
TO FIND A MAN WHOSE HEARTS SINCERE
I FINALLY FEEL, THAT MAN IS HERE
HAVE I BEEN BLESSED WITH HIS PRESENCE
THIS ENERGY HE GIVES, IS THIS OF THE ESSENCE
GROWING MUCH CLOSER, EVRY SECOND OF EACH DAY
AM I A FOOL FOR LETTING IT GET THIS WAY
FOLLOWING MY HEART INSTEAD OF MY MIND
I'VE HEARD THE SAYING BEFORE THAT LOVE IS BLIND
BUT MY EYES ARE OPEN AND THEY LIE ON THE PRIZE
HAVE SEEN MIRAGES BEFORE, BEEN SUCKERED INTO LIES
FOR ONCE IN MY LIFE THESE IMAGES ARE REAL
NOT ONLY HAVE I SEEN THEM, BUT I ALSO CAN FEEL
WHEN I THINK OF OUR UNION, I VISUALIZE TWO DOVES
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN MY LIFE, I THINK I'M IN LOVE

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suthern
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1 posted 2000-04-05 04:37 PM


Good luck!!! *S* This is great!
mystery
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2 posted 2000-04-05 04:59 PM


WHY, THANK YOU SUTHERN!
I DEEPLY APPRECIATE YOUR COMMENT

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2000-04-05 08:21 PM


mystery,
This was excellent.....full of feeling, longing, love.  I wish you and your new love the very best!!!  Sounds as if you deserve it!!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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4 posted 2000-04-05 08:46 PM


Mystery...

I could totally relate to all that was described in this poem! I am very happy for you. I hope you get all you deserve. Sounds like this might be the "one". Good luck! Beautiful expressions here

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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