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SorrowsMystress
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since 04-01-2000
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


0 posted 04-05-2000 09:20 AM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SorrowsMystress

You are crazy to the touch
A wonderful sigh escapes your lips
I'd give heaven the finger
If it would mean I got to be with you
Forever
Your eyes hold a mysteriousness
Only you can decifer
And when you turn them towards me
I feel a rush of excitement
Ecstatic love, a blunt and scary thing
I know we're both in the same boat
Sailing the seas of uncertainty
But I can assure you
I won't lead you astray
And when you need someone there
Just to hold you
Just to comfort you
Just someone to be there
To tell you I love you
You know I'll be right here
Patiently waiting
With a smile upon my face
And my arms outstretched
And without a doubt in my mind.
We've both been hurt before
We've both seen evils beyond our comprehension
But this time will be different
Can't you tell?
This time will be
Extacy
And I'll show you that you can love me
Without hesitation
Without accusation
And without any worries
Because you are my angel
My star, my everything
And when you lay your head down to cry
You know that I will be standing by
With a shoulder and a kind word
And we will lie under the stars
Innocent as angels
Sinful as devils
No one can touch us
We will be invincible......


 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath
© Copyright 2000 Kimberlee Jones - All Rights Reserved
Creperum
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since 04-03-2000
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1 posted 04-05-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Creperum   Email Creperum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Creperum

Well, well, well...  Yet ANOTHER beautifuly written poem.  I have always loved your works.  You have the heart of a poet.  You really do.  I wish I had half the talent you do when it comes to expressing your words on paper...  =)
Dark Angel
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2 posted 04-05-2000 09:58 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hey SM, this is beautiful! well done  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 04-05-2000 11:47 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Whew...this poem says a great deal about the power of love  
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


4 posted 04-05-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

The power of love and patience to wait for that love... this is lovely!
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