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Peek-A-Boo Heart

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Marge Tindal
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Peek-A-Boo Heart
~*Marge Tindal*~

Hidden in the corner
Recessed in my mind
Visions of you enter
Peeking from behind
Doors thought closed
I catch you there in
Peek-A-Boo of mind
Hidden doorway open
Tiny crack at a time
Ducking in and out of
Peek-A-Boo's rhyme

Peek-A-Boo I see you
In a corner of memory
Wanting love to not be
So invisible in your life
As to pass by you again
Without calling you out
Among loves playground
Inviting you come play
Peek-A-Boo I see you





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Michael
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1 posted 04-05-2000 07:24 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Ah, I know how it feels when you find those "doors thought closed" weren't locked.  Peek a boos, Indeed...  Great poem, Marge.


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2 posted 04-05-2000 08:32 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nicely done.  Put a smile on my face to prepare me for the day ahead.  *smile*
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3 posted 04-05-2000 08:52 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

~Marge~
Peek-A-Boo Heart what a delightful title and indeed the poem was exactly that, a delight to read.      


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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4 posted 04-05-2000 09:17 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I hope this one goes into you poetry "Book of Delights". It's almost as delightful as you are
Liz
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5 posted 04-05-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
You and your poem are my delight. *L* Sy
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Hidden doorway open
Tiny crack at a time
Ducking in and out of
Peek-A-Boo's rhyme

Peek-A-Boo I see you
In a corner of memory
Wanting love to not be
So invisible in your life
As to pass by you again
---------------

margie-girl I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!
its perfect!!!
"loves playground"...what an awesome line.
this is one of my favs of yours.
take care,jm

 ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
glass tiger
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7 posted 04-05-2000 11:33 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Marge-

I think this is my favorite one of yours, or at least one of them. Catchy title first of all. Peek a boo heart...I LOVED IT!... You are a very talented poet, and your writing leaves me with a big smile and has quite a calming effect on me. I really enjoyed this one!!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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Aren't memories sometimes a beautiful thing  
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Marge,
     No wI know that you will never cease to amaze me, dear!  Peek-a-boo indeed.  I have loved everything I have read of yours to date, and I find more to enjoy each day!
  

Love ya,
Terry

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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10 posted 04-05-2000 01:10 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Hey, who's this little peek-a-boo
That I see invading you?
Lurking there to catch a peek,
Playing silly hide-and-seek?

If I catch that scalywag
We'll have a little game of Tag
Then he'll find out I'm your man
If not, I'll show him kick-the-can!!!
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*Let me preface these replies by saying that a quick comment to Balladeer the other evening prompted the thought that spawned this little quickie.
Sooooooooo, a GREAT BIG hug to Balladeer !
  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Michael~
Thank you, sweetie.

Mike~
I do like your smile.

Tracie~
You are sooooo kind.

Elizabeth, dear one~
Thank you.  Delights back to you.

Seymour~
I'm delighted that you think so.

JanetMarie~
I am really pleased that this little
poem likes you.

Amy~
Thank you for the kind comments.

Hoot~
Yes, they are always beautiful.

TerryW~
Your comments always please me !
Peek-A-Boo !
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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Ballader~
LOL !  Kick-The-Can indeed !
There I was posting my thanks to the
replies ... and YOU 'peeked' around
the corner !  SEE how you are !
Thank you for the 'quickie'!
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 04-05-2000 01:48 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Peek a Boo Heart - first I was ready for a children's treat, but it quickly escalated into a heart-warming reminder to adults!  Thanks Marge!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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Title and poem are both delightful! *S*
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15 posted 04-05-2000 06:19 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Marge, just to let you know i took a peek-a-boo look at this.  Glad i did!
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This is delightful, Marge!

Denise
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Sunshine~
I guess the child in us all can't resist
a little Peek-A-Boo !  

Suthern~
I'm glad you liked.

Danny~
Peek-A-Boo !
I saw you !

Denise~
Thank you.
It's beginning to grow on me too !
~*Marge*~


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Upbeat and fun - That always works for me, Marge...
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19 posted 04-05-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

*peek* I like what I see...

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

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20 posted 04-05-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Peek-a-Boo indeed!
I almost missed this one!
Great poem marge!
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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Nan~
Thanks .. I like the fun of it too.

Elizabeth~
*Boo* .. I'm glad you do !

Mariee~
I'm glad you didn't miss it too !  
~*Marge*~


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