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The Shaman's Song
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The Shaman's Song |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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What you have done and all you do simple grace-- God's renew... All you have given back to me fertile loam for all to see-- perfect-- as the mustard seed. And yes, I've known it all along... I'm blessed to hum the Shaman's Song. And oh how sweet the harmony, of eyes in truth, eyes that meet... My heart breaks for words to speak... (but my heart breaks so easily...) may it implode in thousand pieces-- to seek repose--serenity... *FOR Me Shaman * [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-05-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Beautiful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
I like this much, nice job. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Serenity this was beautifull done. I enjoyed this one very much! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And yes, I've known it all along... I'm blessed to hum the Shaman's Song. And oh how sweet the harmony, of eyes in truth, eyes that meet... My heart breaks for words to speak... (but my heart breaks so easily...) may it implode in thousand pieces-- to seek repose--serenity... ------------------ my ears hear a song divine... a song serene, sweet harmony heal this tired heart of mine. ***** Serenity-girl, this is exquisite and beautiful... full of your hearts fragile beauty and grace. love ya when your singing (smile) jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Astounding *Applauding here*  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This reads as poetry, and so it should, for it sings as music of expression and sweet serentiy. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all, for your kindness. Love to you, But i think I've got a temperature from all of this spring fever! Off to bed! (And a bowl of gumbo, too...) Thanks... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This is wonderful, serenity. LOL on the spring fever... Me thinks the Sha Man is blessed. Michael |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I have read these sweet words over and over. THis is simply exquisite Liz |
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Ladyhawk Junior Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 18Brownsville, TN -USA- |
superb writing! I adore shaman and Native poetry Ladyhawk THE SONG OF LADYHAWK Hawk says diamonds danced on air Hawk says creator above put them there Hawk says Redtail is now my name and from Wakiyan is where I came From Thunderbeings, from the rock and the tree, he gave me these wings and then set me free Through eyes of split gold shining so bright And what I see now? No joy just fright Shoot at it now, in the tree over there, is song I hear most when not in the air And when my heart breaks and I fly no more I return to Creator and knock on his door Creator says "Hawk come to me fore you were my best that's why I made you soar You tried to show them but they couldn't see fore they saw the diamonds instead of thee Now you go and tell them what I said to say their turn will come just as yours has this day And when they come stand and look me in the eye I will tell them the whens and the whys that it wasn't Hawk race that I choose let die. It was the human that I chose let go A selfish race that could never say no Starving and hungry they let their own grow No Sacred heart has been brought forth to thee I gave them everything yet they turned from me Diamonds, gold, others, shine so bright but I am Creator I bring you the light Remember just once these words you might save Spirit not diamonds you take to your grave |
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Richter_9 Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 41Whereever I happen to be at the time |
This is breathtaking, serenity. Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Lovely song, Ladyhawk--perhaps we should sing in duet? (And Richter--of course, add some baritone?) But thank you both for dusting this off. Much love to you both. |
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