I sit and I wait when will it come The little message of fate
I see the small box It's requests my acceptance I can hardly contain myself
I know on the other end waits what I need what I crave the cure to my bad day
The messages fly by we speak of things unspeakable I relax with a sigh For she is what I need my diamond in the rough
Oh So I wish I could be be with her holding her loving her
To feel her hand resting in mine feel the pain flow away I know the time will come but so far away is that day
I yearn for her to sit with her to sing with her to kiss her
quickly I dial fumble with the numbers to hear her words to hear her laugh to hear her sing I sign with releaf my problems are solved
or so I think.
the dial tone sounds I dread this moment why does she have to go I need to see her but I can't
Who am I fooling How much longer can I last have love dangled in front of your face but it disappears so fast
This is the first poem I've ever really written.. I know it's not that great.. it's not every very poem like.. I"m only 14/male here and never really had a very good time writing them.. but when I fell in love that helped.. I've written a few more poems shortly after I might post.. I just wanted a little feedback is all. I am very much in love with her.. we met on the internet about 2 and a half years ago.. and fell in love about a half a year ago.. I talk to her on the phone and I'm going to California to meet her in the summer
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! As far as "poem like" well I don't know about that....you wrote from your heart and that's where poetry comes from. This is a very good start. Good luck with your meeting and I wish you the very best!!
Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today.
I have to agree on this one, poetry ALWAYS comes from the heart...this is why we write!! I can feel your emotion dripping from this piece- and that in itself is good writin m'friend!!! Keep your heart open and your pen handy!!!
Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
[This message has been edited by devina (edited 04-05-2000).]
Florida's Foreverly Shores
Very well done, young poet, for you write from your heart. There are other poets your age in teen forum and you will enjoy their works as they will yours. Keep writing! We'll look for more from you. WElcome! Liz
Glen Hope, PA USA