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A moments magic

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 04-04-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

         A moments magic

Filigree trees with greenneedle leaves,
Cleave and shadow a moon lit eve.
Spearing thin spears of light in flight.
Sending phantoms into the night.

Dancing in shivers of the breeze,
Fluted and finned by moving trees.
Flashing a wizardry dark grey,
Into shards of elfin at play.

Opens the nights magic of find,
Clears the mind from the black of blind
And by the glory of dispense,
It harps on the strings of your sense.

Fills you with soar and flights of awe,
Flies you into fantasies door.
Places you in the haze of dream
And sweeps you to sorceries seem.

A touch of infinities power
And enchanting as a flower.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 04-04-2000 11:46 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Filigree trees with greenneedle leaves,
Cleave and shadow a moon lit eve.
Spearing thin spears of light in flight.
Sending phantoms into the night.
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Opens the nights magic of find,
Clears the mind from the black of blind
And by the glory of dispense,
It harps on the strings of your sense
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Sy this poem is what is enchanting...perfection of imagery
and so serene, mystical and cryptic.
very well written
take care jm
take care jm

 ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
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Mike
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2 posted 04-04-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Really liked this one...  just flows of the tongue when spoken.  Like muchly.
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 04-05-2000 02:57 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This poetry reads like music
Your words are magical
Another beauty from the master
Love ya
Liz
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 04-05-2000 05:32 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~

'Filigree trees'

enough for me ....
such beauteous thought.
~*Marge*~


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JamesMichael
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Very stylish writing Seymour.    James
Michael
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6 posted 04-05-2000 06:04 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

This carries a purely mystical essance all through, Sy.  Wonderful poem.

Michael
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This dances off my tongue  
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The wording is exquisite and the magic of it will carry me through many days...and nights.  Well done [as always] Sy!  Thanks!

 Sunshine
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9 posted 04-05-2000 04:10 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I have to agree with Marge. *S* This was magic from the first two words! *S*
 
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