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Upon Wings Of Hawk

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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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0 posted 04-04-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for Esmeralda Ponsonby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Esmeralda Ponsonby

Upon Wings Of Hawk

Doth thine eyes shadow with darkness
whilst I call thy name above starkness
cradle thy ailing body within thine arms
cast away wicked spells of evil charms.
I leave thy destiny prisoned within thee
till ye light of day shineth on forever free
I've seen thee smile to thy lasses young
and of flowers fragrance a song ye sung.
Ye hail to behold thy cherished women
abstinence of touch yields thee swim'in
against thine tides of harmony in danger
catch not ye undertow for thou stranger.
I grant thee to follow thy blood as it flows
whilst whispering wind speaks as it blows
leaves of nature kiss thee ground ye walk
make thee wishes fly upon wings of hawk.
Upon thy arrival of thine mornings rebirth
come to me bearing gifts of simple earth
then I shall see thy honesty ye possess
and forgive thee all thine errs nonetheless.

© Copyright 2000 Esmeralda Ponsonby - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-05-2000 05:57 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Esmeralda~
Refreshing thoughts.

'Upon thy arrival of thine mornings rebirth
come to me bearing gifts of simple earth
then I shall see thy honesty ye possess
and forgive thee all thine errs nonetheless.'

Welcome to our 'family' of Passion's poets.
~*Marge*~


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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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2 posted 04-05-2000 09:43 AM       View Profile for Esmeralda Ponsonby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Esmeralda Ponsonby

Lady Marge, I thank thee with gracious heart for thou kind words of welcome and praise. Bless your dear heart with kindness.
Corazon
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this is beautiful, I must say I usually have trouble reading poetry with thee's and thou's, but the flow of this is great and the emotions beautiful, really nicely written  
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 04-05-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A love poem tenderly written.
The ending was just beautiful
Liz
Esmeralda Ponsonby
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5 posted 04-05-2000 12:26 PM       View Profile for Esmeralda Ponsonby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Esmeralda Ponsonby

Corazon, I thank you, and I do understand where your coming from in your statement about the thee's and thou's, I also could not fathom them, but I've just started reading a book staged in this era and it has inspired me.

Lady Santos, I thank you most kindly.
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 04-05-2000 12:38 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

This is poetry. Obviously, written by a talented poet.  Welcome to these halls of poetic expression.  Yours is a welcomed addition, and one to enjoy.
Looking forward to more.
DH
ps....thank you for your kind response to my poem.

[This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 04-05-2000).]
hsystems
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7 posted 04-05-2000 12:51 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Esmerelda, very well done!  It carries me to a Scottish castle upon the moor - which is where I would live if my heart had its way.  Welcome to Passions, and thank you for the lovely trip you sent me on!


Troy
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This flows beautifully..James
Esmeralda Ponsonby
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9 posted 04-05-2000 09:11 PM       View Profile for Esmeralda Ponsonby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Esmeralda Ponsonby

Sir Danny, I thank thee most kindly for thy high regards of thine abilities.

Sir Troy, My thanks I offer to thee for taking thy trip and enjoying, 'twas all my pleasure.

Sir James, I curtsy to thee in thanks.



[This message has been edited by Esmeralda Ponsonby (edited 04-05-2000).]
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10 posted 04-05-2000 09:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice!

Denise
Esmeralda Ponsonby
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Lady Denise: I bid to ye thanks and fair smiles for thine eyes have seen you've walked miles through thy Passions Poetry. Always a kind response from thou mind of yours makes me know you are a special person.
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12 posted 04-05-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This work is rich in flavor and style. Extremely enjoyable reading...thank you
Esmeralda Ponsonby
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Sir Balladeer, I curtsy to thee in thanks.
 
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