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Suzanne
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 18
Florida

0 posted 2000-04-04 10:30 PM


Always in my Heart

Even though now were far apart
you'll always be in my heart
you've been gone for quite a while
but i can hear your laugh and see your smile
you are still a part of me
a part that no one else can see
through it all youve stood right here
and i know youll stay year after year
watching us everyday
hearing all that we have to say
still being my uncle, a friend and a dad
as we remember all the good times that weve had
which we know will happen very soon again
when i see that uncle that dad, that friend
but until then as i try to let you go
ill make sure that this i always know
that even though were far apart
youll always be in my heart!



© Copyright 2000 Suzanne - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-04-04 10:52 PM


Suzanne, this is lovely! Your love shines through in this!!

Denise

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
2 posted 2000-04-04 11:39 PM



You showed so much feeling and love in every line.  Beautiful!!  


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-04-05 11:36 AM


Words from the heart for sure.
Nice writing.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-04-05 12:10 PM


There is no distance to great between two hearts  
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