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Iím trying to move on
I picked up the shattered remains
Of my heart and soul
And Iím trying to move on

But itís hard to walk ahead
When you can do nothing
But look back
Back to the man who rejected you
And find that, after all this
You still love him

If only I had another love
A love that I could look ahead to
Instead of looking back to
A love that isnít the child of dreams
But a beautiful reality

I am waiting for you, my love
Iím trying to move on

Take me away from my broken self
Take me away from my hopeless love
And help me get together
And move on



 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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1 posted 04-04-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

How sad, Lovebug. Sorry things didn't work out for you!   Hope things are looking up for you SOON!

Elizabeth


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2 posted 04-05-2000 11:39 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Nice writing.  Its tough to move on, but its something we have to do, just face another day and the beauty that it can bring.  Sometimes a new start is what we need the most.
Good effort LoveBug
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"The journaey of a thousand miles begins with a single step"~Tao
too bad that first step is often the hardest...((((HUGS))))
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4 posted 04-05-2000 03:06 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I agree with Hoot, about taking the first step. And another thing, just between you and me, this will not be the last love of your life. There is someone out there that is dying to meet you and will love you with all his heart. You just haven't met him yet. But you will in time.
In the meantime, you've got lots of hugs here to keep you warm.
Love ya
Liz
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Thank you all for your support!  

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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Sad and beautiful poem, LoveBug. Well done!

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7 posted 04-06-2000 10:03 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

Actually you are moving on by writing this lovely, sad poem (look and you'll see).  
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