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Do you remember?

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Tara Simms
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0 posted 04-04-2000 07:58 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Do you remember?

Have you already forgotten
The magic between us?
The feel of my hand in yours,
The way your eyes spoke to me
In a single glance

Iíve memorized your touch
Your taste
All stored in the album of my mind
Pages that will never fade

Can you recall the heat
Fire
Passion
That kept us burning the midnight oil?
When youíd wake me in the still of night
Just to make love to me once again?

Reminisce upon our memories
When the sunsets were always golden
And the rain never fell

Let your mind wander through the past
Back to the time
When you held me in your arms
And touched my face

Do you remember?
Because I know Iíll never forget

© Copyright 2000 Tara Simms - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 04-04-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This is so sad, Tara. Sometimes people forget because they choose to. You have expressed your pain very well here.

Elizabeth


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-The Crucible

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2 posted 04-04-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so touching, Tara. Very beautiful!

Denise
Nan
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3 posted 04-04-2000 08:49 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

It's nice to see you posting, Tara.. This is wonderfully sentimental..
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 04-04-2000 09:32 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Tara, the images you capture in this one are wonderful. I second Nan, it's nice to see you posting again  
Danny Holloway
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5 posted 04-05-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Nice title and even nicer poetry.
Enjoy your writing.
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6 posted 04-05-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

this is so touching, memories are priceless, but sometimes painful...very nicely written
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 04-05-2000 02:44 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

"Your touch and your taste all stored in the album of my mind", How beautiful.
Very tender love poem
Liz
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8 posted 04-05-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like your poem very much, Tara... *S*


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9 posted 04-05-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tara~
This just happens to be a lovely
romantic poem .. full to overflowing
with longing and sentimental thought.

'Let your mind wander through the past
Back to the time
When you held me in your arms
And touched my face

Do you remember?
Because I know Iíll never forget'

Those memories do hang in there !
Beautiful.
~*Marge*~


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Tara Simms
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Suthern, I loved your poem.  I once longed for a married man and know the feelings  that you speak of.

Nan and Ruth, it's nice to be back!  I was gone way too long.

Elizabeth and Corazon, no pain here, just a gentle reminder at what we once shared (and hopefully will again).

Denise, Danny, Liz and Marge, thank you for commenting.


 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


hsystems
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11 posted 04-06-2000 11:29 AM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Tara, this is beautiful!  One thing is for certain - this poem will not be forgotten.  Thanks so much for sharing!


Troy

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Tara Simms
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12 posted 04-06-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

hsystem, thanks for the enthusiastic reply!

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


Parker
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13 posted 04-07-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Tara, how could anybody forget, this is beautiful, like the poet.

Parker
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14 posted 04-07-2000 05:49 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

What a lovely and touching work of art. Really paints the picture of the emotions. Great poem!

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tracie66
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15 posted 04-07-2000 05:55 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Tara~
This was filled with a passionate feeling of desire. What a fantastic read, I enjoyed it very much.
Tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Tara Simms
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Parker,    Thank you.

Christie and Tracie, thank you very much!


 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


Martie
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17 posted 04-07-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Such beautiful memories written with grace and tenderness.
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