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cherluvsdean
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0 posted 2000-04-04 07:11 PM



The dream

As I sit here by the water
so peaceful, so serene
my mind quickly turns to you
and I slip into a dream

A dream of you & I
we are together at last
the distance between us
a thing of the past

Holding you so close
for the very first time
our lips gently meet
the taste as sweet as wine

Then I look into your eyes
and know our love is real
Forever and a day
With us, that’s the deal

God’s planned it this way
we’ve known from the start
we belong to each other
no one will ever tear us apart

I love you Dean
Forever Yours
Cher


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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-04-04 08:37 PM


Very sweet work here, Cher! I'm sure Dean loved it too!

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
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cherluvsdean
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2 posted 2000-04-05 07:54 PM


Thank you so much Elizabeth for your thoughts

cherluvsdean

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3 posted 2000-04-05 08:07 PM


Cheryl,

I love the scene with the water, etc.  This is great.  Best of luck with Dean!!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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