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Open Poetry #6

Lost in a Dream of You

cherluvsdean
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since 2000-04-03

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0 posted 2000-04-04 07:05 PM

Lost in a Dream of You

Dreaming of your sweet kisses…
from lips that I have yet to taste
Thinking of you tender caresses…
from hands that I have never held
Drowning in your exquisite eyes…
that I have never gazed into
Imagining myself in your arms…
that have not yet been around me
Hearing you tell me you love me…
from a voice I’ve not yet heard
These are the dreams I have of you…
the man I already love so much.

For you my love
Cher
August 14, 1999 7:30am

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-04-04 08:41 PM

I love the title, and the poem too! Love and pain go hand-in-hand, it seems--no, that's the way it is.

Elizabeth

"He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-04-04 08:42 PM

Very beautiful, Cher!

Denise

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-04-05 10:21 AM

Beautiful Cher!!!

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

4 posted 2000-04-05 11:30 AM

This is poetry. That is the best compliment I could give you.
Well done!!!!!!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2000-04-05 11:36 AM

How tender

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2000-04-05 05:04 PM

This is lovely... well done!

cherluvsdean
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since 2000-04-03

Posts 8

7 posted 2000-04-05 08:00 PM

Thank you all so very much. Its absolutely wonderful to get this kind of feedback...of course how could I not think as much since you are all so very sweet. I am very flattered by all of your comments as I have been browsing in here and the talent is absolutely incredible...what a spectacular idea this poetry forum...I look forward to visiting here in days to come
Thank you all so very much

cherluvsdean

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2000-04-05 08:03 PM

Excellent poem! Please do visit often with delightful verses like this
Liz

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