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Thy Fair Luna

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 04-04-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Luna, thy beauty is fair
Indeed fairer by far
Than for just what you are
Surely not how bright or rare
Nor your constant repair

More so than any mortal device
Is the reason I hold you dear
For your beauty indisputably clear
Those virtues can be counted thrice
No, something else must suffice

It is not outward appearance descried
Which strengthens your beauty
To confess this, I feel is my duty
To me your fairness is found inside
Fair, for how you make me feel tonight

© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 04-04-2000 06:27 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

It is not outward appearance descried
Which strengthens your beauty
To confess this, I feel is my duty
To me your fairness is found inside
Fair, for how you make me feel tonight
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*sigh*

feels pretty great dont it...
stalking you in content,
your jm

 ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
glass tiger
gemini shadow
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 80
the mystic


2 posted 04-04-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for gemini shadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemini shadow

such lovely images are drawn in this.
your so very gifted.
peace
gemini

 I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes
I want to be the touch you need every single night
I want to be your fantasy
And be your reality
And everything between
I want you to need me,
like I need you.
celine dion
Janet Marie
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Posts 18986


3 posted 04-06-2000 11:21 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

told ya I was in  JML poem withdrawl...(smile)
a girls gotta do...well, you know  

stalking you still...
your jm

 The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
vertical horizon

Denise
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4 posted 04-06-2000 01:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, JML! You've painted a lovely vision!!

Denise
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