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SorrowsMystress
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


0 posted 04-04-2000 02:41 PM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SorrowsMystress

What did you expect from me
I'm lying here in agony
Crying out to the deep blue sea
I'm begging, Lord, just let me be

I've submitted to the wounds I bear
Shown everyone who didn't care
Gave my heart, my soul, my prayer
I know this now, life isn't fair

You twisted me and broke me in two
I shrink away at the thought of you
Tell me now, what can I do
To begin again, to start off new

I cried the most I have in years
Overcome by my deepest fears
All I can offer now is my tears
And wait patiently till the trouble clears

You took my soul, you took my core
I've never wanted anything more
Did you mean what you said before
That I will always be your little whore

I'm pleading now, let go! let go!
If you say you love me so
You'd free me from your nasty blow
And the bitterness  which you bestow

So now I make my final plea
Can't you just let go of me
I'm begging  you to set me free
You know you must! JUST LET ME BE!




[This message has been edited by SorrowsMystress (edited 04-04-2000).]
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Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
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1 posted 04-04-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

wow this is a powerful poem..your pain and bitterness lifts off the page.
very well expressed emotions in this.
I hope you find healing and strength in your writing.
take care, jm

 ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
glass tiger
SorrowsMystress
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since 04-01-2000
Posts 179
I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


2 posted 04-04-2000 05:31 PM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SorrowsMystress

JM- my poetry IS my strength. it gives me counsoling when I need it most. It helps me to get my feelings and frustrations out and helps me to realize what I should do. Thank you for your wonderful comment  

 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath
Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 2712
Escondido-California


3 posted 04-05-2000 12:37 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi SorrowsMystress,

I wanted you to know that I read your poem, and it is filled with sadness and yet very powerfully writen. I am here to talk if need to.

Cerenity
Michael
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4 posted 04-05-2000 06:24 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Excellent verse.  Some people just never get enough of you, do they?  I can relate well to this one.


Michael
JamesMichael
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5 posted 04-10-2000 04:14 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I can really relate to the last four lines...there is a person in my life who is away from me now but they still have power over me and I want her to leave me alone..when she calls me it stirs up so many emotions...and not good thoughts.   James
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