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Hidden Love

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0 posted 04-04-2000 02:20 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

Hidden Love
By: Amy M. Kennedy

The love that I feel inside is so real
But this love is forbidden, not suppose to be
So never will you know, never my true feelings will I reveal
It's not that I don't want to tell you, it's that I'm scared you see

I'm scared that you don't love me too
My passion for you grows more and more everyday
Surely by now you must know how much I do love you
I can feel my feelings about to give way

A part of me doesnt want to know the truth, but a bigger part does
Do you love me or am I just being a fool
My heart is full of so much emotion, so much love
But with love there is nothing set in stone, there is no certain rule

You are my friend, and that I do value
Making me laugh, in the way only you can
Not wanting our friendship to be ruined, becoming something shallow
Still wanting so much to reach out for your hand

Want to take you into my arms and press your lips to mine
However I know this is never to be, only in my head
But oh if you loved me, how that would be so divine.
My feelings you will never know, this poem you'll have never read

From afar I will admire you, with love in my heart
But beside you I will just be your friend
At least still by your side I will be, and not apart
And till the ends of time my love I do send

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 04-06-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 04-04-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

show them this sweet poem of longing, love, and devotion, how could anyone resist.
perfectly you aimster!!(smile)
take care my sweets,

 ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
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2 posted 04-04-2000 04:11 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well, I am certainly NOT an expert in the love field... but I do know just a bit about repressing emotion.  It's not worth the pain and the "always wondering" in the end... (just my strictly inprofessional opinion there).  I agree with Janet there, your longing and devotion show clearly.  You could give someone something to smile about for sure.  

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3 posted 04-05-2000 05:52 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

A very tender render from you.
Share those thoughts with the one
who causes you to have them.

Love flourishes when it is
brought out to play among the
hearts of others.

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~

Tara Simms
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4 posted 04-05-2000 10:10 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

There's nothing scarier (or better) than falling in love with a friend.  Take the chance! Tell him!

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley

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5 posted 04-05-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Rejection can be a terrifying thing. Easy to say DO IT!...harder to actually do. Ley your heart be your guide. When there is a right time to let him know, you will know it....
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6 posted 04-06-2000 02:18 AM       View Profile for Tom Sawyer   Email Tom Sawyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tom Sawyer

Hey Aimster --

Read this right after reading your post to my one and only creation, which is kinda ironic.  I spent a lot of years wishing I had asked for that kiss -- only to find out (to my great surprise and delight) how much she wanted it all along! Don't go through life wondering what might have been!  Go get it!  Or at least give it your best shot.

Loved the poetry.  I look forward to reading more from you...

 Catch the witness, catch the wit,
Catch the spirit, catch the spit

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7 posted 04-06-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

I guess I'm of a different mind here. Telling me scare him, so I would flirt and see how he responds.  If he flirts back, well you know your answer.  Good Luv, oh I mean Luck! And I like your poem.
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8 posted 04-06-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for Suzanne   Email Suzanne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suzanne

GREAT POEM! i really like it a lot. i hope things work out for you and him. good luck and maybe one day you'll find the strength to let him know, i sure wish i had it! good job  
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9 posted 06-23-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Enjoyed the read!!!!!
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