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Hidden Love |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Hidden Love < !signature-->By: Amy M. Kennedy The love that I feel inside is so real But this love is forbidden, not suppose to be So never will you know, never my true feelings will I reveal It's not that I don't want to tell you, it's that I'm scared you see I'm scared that you don't love me too My passion for you grows more and more everyday Surely by now you must know how much I do love you I can feel my feelings about to give way A part of me doesnt want to know the truth, but a bigger part does Do you love me or am I just being a fool My heart is full of so much emotion, so much love But with love there is nothing set in stone, there is no certain rule You are my friend, and that I do value Making me laugh, in the way only you can Not wanting our friendship to be ruined, becoming something shallow Still wanting so much to reach out for your hand Want to take you into my arms and press your lips to mine However I know this is never to be, only in my head But oh if you loved me, how that would be so divine. My feelings you will never know, this poem you'll have never read From afar I will admire you, with love in my heart But beside you I will just be your friend At least still by your side I will be, and not apart And till the ends of time my love I do send ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 04-06-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
amy-girl...YA GOTTA TELL EM OR THEY WONT KNOW!!!  show them this sweet poem of longing, love, and devotion, how could anyone resist. perfectly you aimster!!(smile) take care my sweets, jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, I am certainly NOT an expert in the love field... but I do know just a bit about repressing emotion. It's not worth the pain and the "always wondering" in the end... (just my strictly inprofessional opinion there). I agree with Janet there, your longing and devotion show clearly. You could give someone something to smile about for sure.  Michael |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ A very tender render from you. Share those thoughts with the one who causes you to have them. Love flourishes when it is brought out to play among the hearts of others. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
There's nothing scarier (or better) than falling in love with a friend. Take the chance! Tell him! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Rejection can be a terrifying thing. Easy to say DO IT!...harder to actually do. Ley your heart be your guide. When there is a right time to let him know, you will know it.... |
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Tom Sawyer New Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 9 |
Hey Aimster -- Read this right after reading your post to my one and only creation, which is kinda ironic. I spent a lot of years wishing I had asked for that kiss -- only to find out (to my great surprise and delight) how much she wanted it all along! Don't go through life wondering what might have been! Go get it! Or at least give it your best shot. Loved the poetry. I look forward to reading more from you... Catch the witness, catch the wit, Catch the spirit, catch the spit Lee-Lifeson-Peart |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
I guess I'm of a different mind here. Telling me scare him, so I would flirt and see how he responds. If he flirts back, well you know your answer. Good Luv, oh I mean Luck! And I like your poem. |
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Suzanne Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 18Florida |
GREAT POEM! i really like it a lot. i hope things work out for you and him. good luck and maybe one day you'll find the strength to let him know, i sure wish i had it! good job |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed the read!!!!! |
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