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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-04-04 12:50 PM


I was speaking a tale that had been told
That the streets are not paved with gold
And fairy tales don’t come true
False is the promise of contentment
The only thing real is resentment
And heavy is the price overdue

It left me wandering a desolate place
Grim was the doom written on my face
I could hide it no more
Comfort was not to be found again
Indifference was starting to win
I could not now ignore

Just then an angel appeared overhead
Spread wide her wings
And awoke a heart left for dead

I began listening to a tale I never heard
She spoke to me, her eyes as words
And fairy tales do come true
The streets are all paved with gold
Ever endless works of wonder to behold
And skies a deeper shade blue

The weight of ages lifted from me
For the first time I could easily breathe
I am somehow something more
Life is sacred and new again
Each second is a long lost friend
I know now what I’m living for

Just then the angel, with wings outspread
Enfolded arms about me
And held close to her heart my weary head


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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2000-04-04 02:16 PM


JML

With the lump in my throat from reading this, I thank you my friend. Angels are all around us...here on Earth and surely in heaven. And every once in a while we are blessed enough to have one grace our lives. I had mine...glad you have yours.

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-04-04 02:18 PM


I was speaking a tale that had been told
That the streets are not paved with gold
And fairy tales don’t come true
False is the promise of contentment
The only thing real is resentment
And heavy is the price overdue
----------------------
The weight of ages lifted from me
For the first time I could easily breathe
I am somehow something more
Life is sacred and new again
Each second is a long lost friend
I know now what I’m living for

Just then the angel, with wings outspread
Enfolded arms about me
And held close to her heart my weary head
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another beautiful poem about angels...
most heavenly to read *S*...
stalking you still,
your jm

 ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
glass tiger

SorrowsMystress
Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178
I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up.
3 posted 2000-04-04 02:43 PM


Your talent overwhelms me. I have mucho respect for you and your writing. Keep it up! I loved this one.
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-04-04 02:49 PM


Excellent writing...I would like to meet this angel.   James
gemini shadow
Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 70
the mystic
5 posted 2000-04-04 10:23 PM


jml
this is so very beautiful,
absolutely angelic.
most enjoyable to read.
gemini

 I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes
I want to be the touch you need every single night
I want to be your fantasy
And be your reality
And everything between
I want you to need me,
like I need you.
celine dion

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