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Dark Angel
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0 posted 04-04-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


      Wet

Thickly clouds
         of water drops
cover the dense
        forest floor

wild trees
     unaltered, peer
down through
tempestuous fog
     as
          I
             savour
   crisp
rich air
   closely curling
       my nakedness
against wet
   evergreen shrubs
of native land

hauntingly
    aroused within
      this ghostly mist
   I lay wrapped
         amorously
     wanting

             you.

    Dark Angel
       2000


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge






[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 04-04-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
mete out
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1 posted 04-04-2000 11:02 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***dark angel,
this is great.
i love your descriptions,they are impeccable.
a fantastic poem.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


Cerenity
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2 posted 04-04-2000 11:12 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Dark Angel,

This is perfect, you express your feelings so deeply, thank you.

Cerenity
Denise
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3 posted 04-04-2000 12:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very beautiful, Dark Angel! Very lovely!

Denise
Danny Holloway
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4 posted 04-04-2000 02:34 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I like the expression and the style.
Nice writing.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


5 posted 04-04-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This has the unmistakable feel of spring right after the snow melts. Good one, DA.  
WhtDove
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6 posted 04-04-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I picture it a bit nipply out there?  hehehe
Great one DA...hope ya feeling better soon Hon. See shouldn't be out naked in the bushes.  
Nan
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7 posted 04-04-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Quite a visage to behold... I enjoyed this a lot, DA...
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 04-04-2000 09:25 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

WHOOOO HOOO....................this is driping with sensuality  
Dark Angel
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9 posted 04-05-2000 10:39 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

mete out,why thank you so very much for your lovely reply and kind compliment.  
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Cerenity, thank you so much and you're welcome!
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Thank you so much Denise  
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Danny, so glad you enjoyed, thanks muchly  
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Sharon thank so much hon!  
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Angel, heheh nipply indeed, Thanks so very much  
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Nan, glad you enjoyed - thank you  
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Ruth, yes! the fog does that to me   Thank you so much honey.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


INclan
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10 posted 04-05-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Yup!  This brings out the animal in me...

Well Done,

INclan
Tom Sawyer
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11 posted 04-06-2000 02:08 AM       View Profile for Tom Sawyer   Email Tom Sawyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tom Sawyer

Angel, I love your passion; you communicate it so well.  Your choice of words is wonderful.  I feel the wetness dripping off of EVERYthing in this picture.  Really enjoyable stuff.


 Catch the witness, catch the wit,
Catch the spirit, catch the spit

Lee-Lifeson-Peart
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 04-06-2000 04:45 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Excellent writing, Dark Angel
A lot of sensuality in this
Liz
Sven
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13 posted 04-06-2000 11:54 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

DA,
   I just love the way that your poem "drips" with passion and sensuality. . . you always amaze me with the depth of your emotion. . .

Beautiful as always. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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