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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Wet Thickly clouds of water drops cover the dense forest floor wild trees unaltered, peer down through tempestuous fog as I savour crisp rich air closely curling my nakedness against wet evergreen shrubs of native land hauntingly aroused within this ghostly mist I lay wrapped amorously wanting you. Dark Angel 2000 < !signature--> What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 04-04-2000).] |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***dark angel, this is great. i love your descriptions,they are impeccable. a fantastic poem. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dark Angel, This is perfect, you express your feelings so deeply, thank you. Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful, Dark Angel! Very lovely! Denise |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I like the expression and the style. Nice writing. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This has the unmistakable feel of spring right after the snow melts. Good one, DA.  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I picture it a bit nipply out there? hehehe Great one DA...hope ya feeling better soon Hon. See shouldn't be out naked in the bushes.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Quite a visage to behold... I enjoyed this a lot, DA...  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WHOOOO HOOO....................this is driping with sensuality  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
mete out,why thank you so very much for your lovely reply and kind compliment. --------------- Cerenity, thank you so much and you're welcome! --------------- Thank you so much Denise --------------- Danny, so glad you enjoyed, thanks muchly --------------- Sharon thank so much hon! --------------- Angel, heheh nipply indeed, Thanks so very much --------------- Nan, glad you enjoyed - thank you --------------- Ruth, yes! the fog does that to me Thank you so much honey. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Yup! This brings out the animal in me... Well Done, INclan |
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Tom Sawyer New Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 9 |
Angel, I love your passion; you communicate it so well. Your choice of words is wonderful. I feel the wetness dripping off of EVERYthing in this picture. Really enjoyable stuff. Catch the witness, catch the wit, Catch the spirit, catch the spit Lee-Lifeson-Peart |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Excellent writing, Dark Angel A lot of sensuality in this Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
DA, I just love the way that your poem "drips" with passion and sensuality. . . you always amaze me with the depth of your emotion. . . Beautiful as always. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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