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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Come back to me my special one, When you're gone from my life, My world it comes undone, My only friends, pain and strife. Come to me my heart, take my hand, Tis only now I begin to understand, The depth of feelings I hold for you, You've ruined me, for no other can compare to you. Come to my land of the midday sun, Or come when the full moon is high, Together we'll share in the day's beauty, Underneath the Southern skies. But alas these wants are only wishes, My dreams to pathetic to come true, You can never life precariously, No matter what you try to do...... There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Hello, You have a nice poem there. Many of us have felt this way before. Thank you for sharing.. Ronil Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, this is a wonderful poem, and your wishes are not pathetic, they will come true, someday. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful poem lisa, full of your heart... keep wishing sweets...dreams come true if we believe. jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Here's hoping all your wishes come true |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
But without wishes and dreams, where would cometh the strength to face each day. Dream little dove and your dream shall be, but maybe not easily to see. (read that somewhere) Enjoyed reading your poem. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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