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Evermore ~My first attempt at an acrostic~
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Evermore ~My first attempt at an acrostic~ |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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Majestically she flies through the air, Airborne among the winds and heaven Resisting nothing in her path, Irresistably taking every chance Evermore to fly until life has ceased. "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ I like it. You done good !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely done. Enjoyed. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
marie, this is way cool, and a beautful poem, so much imagery packed in so few words. I'll have to try one of these. you made it look easy...your just that good *S* take care,jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Wow~ Thanks for all your kind replies!!~ ~~Marie~~  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Short, but ever so sweet. Well done Liz |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Do one for me....D A N N Y |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
nicely done and pretty to..good job. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
What a great way of looking at yourself... nice job Lady Marie... may you always fly free. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marie, I like this one....short and sweet!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Liz~ Thanks much~ Danny~ Ok, I'll post it in a few~ Thanks for reading this one~ CherylLynn~ Thank YOU! Andrew~ Why thank you, Good Sir~ Lone Wolf~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I would say you handled the form very well, Marie. Nice work!!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 This is excellent...so much with so few. Thank you for trying it...it works well for you !! Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Marie, just read the one you wrote for me. Its fantastic. What wonderful verse you used. I really appreciate the effort you made. Thank You. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Great Acrostic |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thanks all for reading and enjoying this one! Danny... you're welcome. It was my pleasure. Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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