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Evermore ~My first attempt at an acrostic~

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mariee66
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Majestically she flies through the air,
Airborne among the winds and heaven
Resisting nothing in her path,
Irresistably taking every chance
Evermore to fly until life has ceased.



 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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1 posted 04-03-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mariee~
I like it.
You done good !  
~*Marge*~


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Mike
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2 posted 04-03-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nicely done.  Enjoyed.
Janet Marie
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marie, this is way cool, and a beautful poem, so much imagery packed in so few words.
I'll have to try one of these.
you made it look easy...your just that good *S*
take care,jm

 ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
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mariee66
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Wow~
Thanks for all your kind replies!!~
~~Marie~~
     
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 04-05-2000 03:25 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Short, but ever so sweet.
Well done
Liz
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6 posted 04-05-2000 06:26 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Do one for me....D A N N Y
CherylLynnMckee
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nicely done and pretty to..good job.

 
Andrew Scott
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8 posted 04-05-2000 07:26 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

What a great way of looking at yourself... nice job Lady Marie... may you always fly free.
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9 posted 04-05-2000 08:00 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Marie,
I like this one....short and sweet!!!

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mariee66
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Liz~
Thanks much~

Danny~
Ok, I'll post it in a few~
Thanks for reading this one~

CherylLynn~
Thank YOU!

Andrew~
Why thank you, Good Sir~

Lone Wolf~


Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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I would say you handled the form very well, Marie. Nice work!!!  
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This is excellent...so much with so few.  Thank you for trying it...it works well for you !!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Danny Holloway
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Marie, just read the one you wrote for me.
Its fantastic.  What wonderful verse you used.
I really appreciate the effort you made.
Thank You.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
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Great Acrostic  
mariee66
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Thanks all for reading and enjoying this one!

Danny... you're welcome.  It was my pleasure.

Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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