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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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Your eyes Sparkling in bright start radiance Heaven sent my sight Drawing exorbitantly onward Blue wavelength absorbing my soul My want My need They fill my horizons And I am lost Drowning in azure depths Revived by a single Kiss |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alicat~ The title caught me .. and then you matched the azure color with your phrases. I like it very much. Beautiful thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Aaah...The blue eyes of serenity are twinkling now...thank you Mr. Alicat! I choose to take this one personally anyway, so humor me! Nice... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
One simple kiss, eh??? You're not too hard to please...  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I don't get it. I'm looking, searching, seeking out the barb, the punchline...I mean, this IS Alicat, my idol...it must be there, hidden somewhere and I can't find it! From all outward appearances this appears to be a nicely crafted, straight poem. Oh, you are so clever, 'cat!!!!!!!! |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
MT, thank you  Serenity, glad you liked it, and i'll humor ya  Nan...yeah, I'm very easy to please...a kiss can do more than an entire sheet of 'X'  Balladeer, hate to disappoint you, but strangely, there is no hidden barb to this one....wrote it on the fly after a friend on mine stopped by for a visit. Inspiration comes in all forms. Thanks again guys, for taking the time to make me smile...and yes, not only am I easy to please, but very easy to amuse.  Alicat the Persnikitty  [This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 04-03-2000).] |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh now, see??! LOL My dear friend, and what a wonderful visit we had today too...minus the fact that I was doing homework on your floor. hehehe It's so good to see you posting again, I look forward to more Alastair!! May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
lovely, romantic poem, alicat. it's amazing the power eyes can have on a person, isn't it? michael |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautifully romantic!! love this. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Okay, Okay...UNCLE....oops...sorry forgot what I was talking about for a moment. Beautiful poem ALicat, like this romantic side of you. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful and romantic and I loved the ending Liz |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Well, well well.. Another well written piece. On the fly huh? I told you that that was the best way to go though I see that this time you had a little help from a friend.. heheh.. Love, Lady |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely, lovely, lovely! This was very romantic. One of your best sir. But I do have a question....would you like me to send you some paper? If you don't have anything to write on, I think we could come up with something! After all your statement that you 'wrote this on the fly' really tore at me..but then again, it's wonderful that you could train the flies there where you live to sit still long enough to have a peom jotted down on their backs...so clever of you! |
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