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Alicat
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0 posted 04-03-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

Your eyes
Sparkling in bright start radiance
Heaven sent my sight
Drawing exorbitantly onward
Blue wavelength absorbing my soul
My want
My need
They fill my horizons
And I am lost
Drowning in azure depths
Revived by a single
Kiss
© Copyright 2000 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 04-03-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Alicat~
The title caught me ..
and then you matched the azure color
with your phrases.
I like it very much.
Beautiful thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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serenity blaze
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2 posted 04-03-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Aaah...The blue eyes of serenity are twinkling now...thank you Mr. Alicat!
I choose to take this one personally anyway,
so humor me!  Nice...
Nan
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3 posted 04-03-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

One simple kiss, eh???
You're not too hard to please...
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4 posted 04-03-2000 10:32 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I don't get it. I'm looking, searching, seeking out the barb, the punchline...I mean, this IS Alicat, my idol...it must be there, hidden somewhere and I can't find it! From all outward appearances this appears to be a nicely crafted, straight poem. Oh, you are so clever, 'cat!!!!!!!!
Alicat
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5 posted 04-03-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

MT, thank you  

Serenity, glad you liked it, and i'll humor ya  

Nan...yeah, I'm very easy to please...a kiss can do more than an entire sheet of 'X'  

Balladeer, hate to disappoint you, but strangely, there is no hidden barb to this one....wrote it on the fly after a friend on mine stopped by for a visit.  Inspiration comes in all forms.    


Thanks again guys, for taking the time to make me smile...and yes, not only am I easy to please, but very easy to amuse.    


Alicat the Persnikitty    

[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 04-03-2000).]
Nicole
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Oh now, see??!  LOL  My dear friend, and what a wonderful visit we had today too...minus the fact that I was doing homework on your floor.  hehehe

It's so good to see you posting again, I look forward to more Alastair!!



 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
Michael
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7 posted 04-04-2000 02:21 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

lovely, romantic poem, alicat.  it's amazing the power eyes can have on a person, isn't it?


michael
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8 posted 04-05-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beautifully romantic!! love this.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


hoot_owl_rn
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Okay, Okay...UNCLE....oops...sorry forgot what I was talking about for a moment. Beautiful poem ALicat, like this romantic side of you.
Elizabeth Santos
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Beautiful and romantic and I loved the ending
Liz
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11 posted 04-05-2000 05:28 PM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

Well, well well.. Another well written piece.  On the fly huh?  I told you that that was the best way to go though I see that this time you had a little help from a friend.. heheh..

Love,
Lady
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12 posted 04-05-2000 08:34 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely, lovely, lovely! This was very romantic. One of your best sir. But I do have a question....would you like me to send you some paper? If you don't have anything to write on, I think we could come up with something! After all your statement that you 'wrote this on the fly' really tore at me..but then again, it's wonderful that you could train the flies there where you live to sit still long enough to have a peom jotted down on their backs...so clever of you!      
 
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