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Scrimshaw Poetry

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lucky
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since 01-17-2000
Posts 1648
Idaho


0 posted 04-03-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lucky

Scrimshaw Poetry

Well come as I was
in courage by a fiend to be gone this
journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold
get used this way it did too Iím so glad butt sad you there
yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft
and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you
into a piece full come for table ground but if you no
thing like me you be tried of the same mold
contempt or airy voids that sneaks to
glory fly woke gather then tall
ants which draft tick
ally skewers art and graces
such in dived level souls with the
drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any
be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own
lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams
thy music your peach the very mass sagť of finessť
in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart
con trash to ease kind of odor ease
very same will not rest pond
to a poets rule of dumb
which pears to be just act
ally what they lethal ridge ally
cordon wit newt protest or sin sure
as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of
finessť... so if I woke at it yon enough
will fat make it add mire able odor
I weight for the voids to rule
ball looming nocturne
ally true in neat..?

[and what an intricate scrimshaw piece Godís engraving me]




[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-18-2000).]
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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 04-03-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lucky~
As an avid admirer and collector of
Scrimshaw ... I can tell you that the
title of this one caught my eye right
away.

Like the beauty of the pieces I hold ..
this 'intricate' carving of you holds me
spellbound.

I believe that this is very near and
dear to your heart .. and therefore it
is to mine.  

My friend ... you've carved
a collector's piece for sure.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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2 posted 04-03-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This is...WOW! I loved it!!!
Mike
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3 posted 04-03-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nicely done.  I enjoyed very much.
Martie
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4 posted 04-04-2000 12:55 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is just wonderful, Lucky!
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 08-26-99
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northern mountains, Idaho


5 posted 04-05-2000 03:07 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

I can see the wonderful symbolism - your words " these small pieces of carved poetry have come to symbolize life once left behind" are so true!  Each poem tells a story of one kind or another, about one part of life or another, until our minds are lined with carved shelves, holding each carved memory.
And you're a rare and treasured "scrimshaw piece" indeed, my darling.



[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 04-05-2000).]
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 04-05-2000 03:20 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

After Rosemary's loving comment, he won't even notice that I thought this was a wonderful piece of poetry and I loved the title.
Liz
hsystems
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 320
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7 posted 04-05-2000 03:46 AM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Very nicely put, Lucky!  You obviously have the heart of a philosopher and the soul of a poet - a great combination in my book.  

Troy

 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 04-05-2000 10:36 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful  
lucky
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since 01-17-2000
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Idaho


9 posted 04-05-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Best RE:gards thank kyou

Marge

You may need to get yourself an RV to put all those collectables. Don't forget how near and dear you and your are to us.

Whtdove

It's always so nice to see your cute little nose poking around my corner. Got your e-mail and will send RE: ASAP.

Mike

thank kyou and I hope to be seeing more of yours too.

Aw Martie

I see I caught you on one of your wordy days. Just to know you were their_here_where is the 'stute anyway.

Ducky Dearest

Maybe we need a new RV for collectables it seems like I just got here and it's a mess. No, no, no, leave it 'till tomorrow.

Liz

And I saw you sneak in that little jewel, your a darling for saying such. YOU, I ALWAYS NOTICE..! 'course I may pick up an idea or three while brozing.

Troy

Thank you too. My wife wants me to dump the philosopher and keep the poet would'nt you know it..!

Ruth

Little needs be said as your rep. preceeds you. Just to see that red hair on my page. Oh no, here comes Rosemary my blond little Ducky... and... she's got a broom. HeLp. I didn't mean it... I'll never mention red (OW) again.

Much Love Passions


 
 
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