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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-04-03 09:17 PM


Scrimshaw Poetry

Well come as I was
in courage by a fiend to be gone this
journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold
get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there
yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft
and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you
into a piece full come for table ground but if you no
thing like me you be tried of the same mold
contempt or airy voids that sneaks to
glory fly woke gather then tall
ants which draft tick
ally skewers art and graces
such in dived level souls with the
drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any
be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own
lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams
thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé
in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart
con trash to ease kind of odor ease
very same will not rest pond
to a poets rule of dumb
which pears to be just act
ally what they lethal ridge ally
cordon wit newt protest or sin sure
as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of
finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough
will fat make it add mire able odor
I weight for the voids to rule
ball looming nocturne
ally true in neat..?

[and what an intricate scrimshaw piece God’s engraving me]
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[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-18-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-04-03 09:24 PM


Lucky~
As an avid admirer and collector of
Scrimshaw ... I can tell you that the
title of this one caught my eye right
away.

Like the beauty of the pieces I hold ..
this 'intricate' carving of you holds me
spellbound.

I believe that this is very near and
dear to your heart .. and therefore it
is to mine.  

My friend ... you've carved
a collector's piece for sure.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-04-03 11:24 PM


This is...WOW! I loved it!!!
Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

3 posted 2000-04-03 11:39 PM


Nicely done.  I enjoyed very much.

Martie
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4 posted 2000-04-04 12:55 PM


This is just wonderful, Lucky!
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
5 posted 2000-04-05 03:07 AM


I can see the wonderful symbolism - your words " these small pieces of carved poetry have come to symbolize life once left behind" are so true!  Each poem tells a story of one kind or another, about one part of life or another, until our minds are lined with carved shelves, holding each carved memory.
And you're a rare and treasured "scrimshaw piece" indeed, my darling.



[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 04-05-2000).]

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
6 posted 2000-04-05 03:20 AM


After Rosemary's loving comment, he won't even notice that I thought this was a wonderful piece of poetry and I loved the title.
Liz

hsystems
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 319
Murray, UT, USA
7 posted 2000-04-05 03:46 AM


Very nicely put, Lucky!  You obviously have the heart of a philosopher and the soul of a poet - a great combination in my book.  

Troy

 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 2000-04-05 10:36 AM


Beautiful  
lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
9 posted 2000-04-05 06:33 PM


Best RE:gards thank kyou

Marge

You may need to get yourself an RV to put all those collectables. Don't forget how near and dear you and your are to us.

Whtdove

It's always so nice to see your cute little nose poking around my corner. Got your e-mail and will send RE: ASAP.

Mike

thank kyou and I hope to be seeing more of yours too.

Aw Martie

I see I caught you on one of your wordy days. Just to know you were their_here_where is the 'stute anyway.

Ducky Dearest

Maybe we need a new RV for collectables it seems like I just got here and it's a mess. No, no, no, leave it 'till tomorrow.

Liz

And I saw you sneak in that little jewel, your a darling for saying such. YOU, I ALWAYS NOTICE..! 'course I may pick up an idea or three while brozing.

Troy

Thank you too. My wife wants me to dump the philosopher and keep the poet would'nt you know it..!

Ruth

Little needs be said as your rep. preceeds you. Just to see that red hair on my page. Oh no, here comes Rosemary my blond little Ducky... and... she's got a broom. HeLp. I didn't mean it... I'll never mention red (OW) again.

Much Love Passions


 

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