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cherluvsdean
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0 posted 2000-04-03 09:09 PM


To Dean, With Love


He Sleeps

As I sit here thinking of him
He sleeps
And I wonder is he dreaming?
Is he dreaming of us
And all that we are going to do
All that we will share
Our lives, our love
As he sleeps
I think about how it will feel
Lying next to him
Our bodies pressed to each other
The warmth of his breath
On the curve of my neck
His arms around me
Holding me tight
His chest against my back
Feeling the rhythmic beating
Of his heart

At the very thought of
Being next to him
My heart races
My body tingles
I feel that familiar feeling
Longing for his touch
His sweet caresses
And his passionate kisses
I close my eyes
I feel him near me
I feel him inside my soul
Where did he come from?
This beautiful man before me
And am I deserving
Of such a love like this
I love him completely
He is my life, my love, my everything
As he sleeps


I love you baby, with all my heart

Cher


© Copyright 2000 cherluvsdean - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2000-04-03 09:19 PM


Sounds like a very lovely relationship to me.. Welcome to Passions - We can always make room for another romantic around here.. Check your email for a special greeting..
Denise
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2 posted 2000-04-03 09:24 PM


This is very beautiful, Cher! Welcome to Passions!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-04-03 10:30 PM


Cher~
   Sounds like~
        Sounds like~
             Sounds like love to me~

Lovely, lovely thoughts.
Be happy !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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mariee66
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4 posted 2000-04-03 10:35 PM


Wow~
That was beautiful~
BRAVO~~BRAVO~~
What a great entrance!
Welcome Cher~

Marie~
(Has he read this?)


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard



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5 posted 2000-04-03 10:45 PM


Well, I see you made it....and I'm glad you did! Beautiful thoughts.....a big WELCOME to you!  
Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-04-04 12:50 PM


Welcome to the family! This is lovely!  
SorrowsMystress
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7 posted 2000-04-04 03:06 AM


You know...I feel the same exact way when I lay down to sleep with my boyfriend. That warm and fuzzy just totally fills me up inside. I love this poem and I will more than likely keep it in my personal archives (A place dedicated to those poets who inspire me, whether famous or not yet known...) so I can look back and always remember what it felt like. Good work and a heartfelt welcome to Passions!!! Hope to see a LOT more from you soon
mete out
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8 posted 2000-04-04 10:54 AM


***cherluvsdean,   (gr8 name btw)
this is beautiful, and so true.
i feel exactly the same with my boyfriend.
an absolutely exquisite first post. well done.
welcome to passions...i'll be watching...


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.



cherluvsdean
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9 posted 2000-04-04 06:49 PM


All i can say is WOW!!!
Thank you all so much for your kind words and for the warm welcome...but i must give credit where credit is due...to the love of my life...Dean...he is my inspiration.  I love you Dean.
Again thank you all so much
I truly look forward to reading the thoughts and feelings of others...i have browsed in here and what can I say but Bravo!!!!  There are so many talented people posting here...it's absolutely wonderful
Tahnks for letting me share with all of you


cherluvsdean
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10 posted 2000-04-04 06:59 PM


Marie...yes he has read this...i share everything with him...
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2000-04-04 07:43 PM


Welcome to passions, and I will be enjoying your romantic poetry. This one was excellent!
Liz

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2000-04-05 05:55 AM


Wonderful description of a warm and tender relationship.   James
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13 posted 2000-04-05 10:38 AM


Beautiful thoughts...welcome to passions  
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