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~Sweet Elation~

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Janet Marie
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0 posted 04-03-2000 04:15 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Janet Marie

Sweet Elation

Embraced in this moment, so perfect, so rare,
allowing myself this contentment, your gift to share.
Music plays softly, the sun is setting slow,
my body still tingling ... warmed by afterglow.
I can still hear you breathing, whispering my name ...
now that you've touched me like this, I'll never be the same.
For it is only in these moments, when lovers gently touch...
that elation and contentment, can be felt this much.
Wrap your body around me, put your lips on mine,
take me to the moment ... when hearts and souls entwine.

Janet Marie

**for my partner in rhyme, thank you for the inspiration, and content. *S*



 ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
glass tiger
© Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved
mariee66
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since 01-30-2000
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Recess, OfYourMind


1 posted 04-03-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Wow~
This was an awsome poem~
I could sense and envision this one~
Great job~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


EagleOne
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since 03-07-2000
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Between a laugh and a tear...


2 posted 04-03-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

WOW, JM this is great. But a moment in time but such a wonderful moment, and wonderfully expressed.

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


3 posted 04-03-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I loved this Janet..especially the very first line..Embraced in this moment, so perfect, so rare.   I am trying to pull myself out of my past and live in the moment and enjoy every new moment.  Happy to see that you are experiencing some nice ones. James
serenity blaze
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4 posted 04-03-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

JM--so glad there's enough to go around!  Simply Rapturous!   My turn now to type Mmm.
Mmm.  Mmmmmmmmmmm...
Parker
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5 posted 04-03-2000 06:31 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Janet, this is a gem....
my body still tingling ... warmed by afterglow.....
I really loved that, I think I can picture as soft smile living here.

Parker
Aimster
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6 posted 04-03-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Janet-

Yowsers! This was a HOT and ELECTRIFYING piece of work if I ever did see! I really am glad that you are experiencing moments such as these. Oh I loved the title as well. Sure glad I read this one!!

Take care
love
amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Danny Holloway
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7 posted 04-03-2000 06:46 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Another excellent poem.  Your poetry has become a must read for me.
So nice.
tracie66
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Victoria, Australia


8 posted 04-03-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

~Janet Marie
The title to your poem is exactly what your poem is
~Sweet Elation~
~Beautiful~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
WhtDove
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9 posted 04-03-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Mmm good! Just like a warm bowl of Campbells Soup. Well, better than that but ya know what I mean.
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10 posted 04-03-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ahhhhhh .. JanetMarie~
You are cavorting with a romantic muse !
Yahoo !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan
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11 posted 04-04-2000 07:17 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice... "Entwinement" is such a wonderful word to wrap into a poem, isn't it?..;*
 
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