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CMGrimm
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0 posted 2000-04-03 03:59 PM


Monday Morning

Bleary eyed and weary
head tugging
at my body
trying to get
me to rise...
Slapping snooze...
laying back once more
trying to capture
dreams long forgotten,
only to be
awakened once more
from my slumber
by the smell
of fresh coffee,
and the screaming
of my digital
rooster...

Christopher M. Grimm


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 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.

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Xeonox
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1 posted 2000-04-03 05:47 PM


I never get to read many orginial poems such as yourself. Preety good one. Describing one's day, I have never thought myself.



 Ronil (the one and lonely)

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2 posted 2000-04-03 08:11 PM


LOL, your poem reminded me of the only alarm clock that would wake our daughter up in the morning, it was some obnoctious bird yelling and saying different things, I'm surprised she never threw it across the room, Great poem  

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Denise
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3 posted 2000-04-03 09:07 PM


This is great, Chris! Monday mornings are the worst!

Denise

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4 posted 2000-04-03 11:19 PM


Sounds like me in the morning. If it were up to me that snooze button would keep getting pushed. =o)  Good one!
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5 posted 2000-04-03 11:25 PM


ChrisG~
Snooze .. you lose !
But this one is a WINNER !
~*Marge*~


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CMGrimm
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6 posted 2000-04-04 03:26 PM


Thanks xeonox, dreamer, denise, white dove, and marge.  I wondered if anyone still believed in me...lol...
Well..it's off I go again...see ya in a couple days.

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

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