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RAM
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fresh as salt kissed air
painted by waves bearing peace
echoes of whispers

  RAM  4/3/00


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Very short and sweet, but expressing a lot.  Sometimes it doesn't take many words to display how you feel.  WEll done.  

 Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart.
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2 posted 04-04-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ram~
I like this.
I am into Haiku.
Keep 'em coming.
You've done a BEAUTIFUL job
with this one.
~*Marge*~


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What a welcome breeze this is!  Fresh and sweet...MMmmnice!
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4 posted 04-04-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RAM

Dawn, thanks.  Sometimes zero words work even better.

Marge,  I have used the Haiku form relatively little.  Thanks.  I like to joke that I am not zensitive enough to write many of them.  LOL

Thanks, Serenity.  I'm tickled to think that the feeling of a breeze comes across - I was wanting it to feel that way.

Rick


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