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Heaven Sends For You

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 04-03-2000 02:56 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

By cherubic graces we are fated
Held together by common interests
Winged angels measure, our hearts weighted,
We somehow find ourselves a place to rest
Love shall be willed upon us now, its true
For all of Heaven smiles with sweetness pure
And rapture wrapped in bliss for all you do
Your fragile nature itself half the lure
Cold comfort in today, not in sorrow,
For when you ascend, my heart will go stiff
Watching them take you where I cannot go
Useless is my longing for only if

With this broken arrow I cling unto,
Waiting helpless, as Heaven sends for you

© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
SorrowsMystress
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


1 posted 04-03-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SorrowsMystress

Wonderful....simply wonderful. This is the kind of poem I've been looking for to express how I've been feeling this last week about someone very close to me. Thank you for sharing it and allowing me to read and get the expression out. I loved it...Bravo
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


2 posted 04-03-2000 03:09 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Lurvely poem. A powerful expression.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

Janet Marie
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3 posted 04-03-2000 04:13 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Held together by common interests
Winged angels measure, our hearts weighted,
We somehow find ourselves a place to rest
Love shall be willed upon us now, its true
--------------------
Your fragile nature itself half the lure
Cold comfort in today, not in sorrow,
For when you ascend, my heart will go stiff
Watching them take you where I cannot go
Useless is my longing for only if
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*sigh* you know I LOVE this one...its perfect...one of my most favs, for sure...as are all the new ones...and old ones and...
well, you know *S*
this is graceful and perfect.Beauty in words.
stalking you in Heaven    
your jm

From Heavens light to your heart...inspiration found,
By our emotions of rhyme and verse, we are sweetly bound.
These words sublime in your wisdom, your grace -- so true...
I am touched by an angel, when touched by you.
jm


...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
glass tiger




[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 04-03-2000).]
Corazon
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4 posted 04-03-2000 04:29 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

powerful words...your feelings touch deeply  
JamesMichael
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5 posted 04-03-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Lovely..I loved it.   James
gemini shadow
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since 03-28-2000
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the mystic


6 posted 04-03-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for gemini shadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemini shadow

this is SO beautiful, you show such tenderness and warmth in your words...
I know the person who inspires these emotions in you must be very touched by this.
She must feel very lucky.
I know I would.  
peace
gemini


 I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes
I want to be the touch you need every single night
I want to be your fantasy
And be your reality
And everything between
I want you to need me,
like I need you.
celine dion
Billy Bolden
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7 posted 04-04-2000 07:23 AM       View Profile for Billy Bolden   Email Billy Bolden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Billy Bolden

JML,
"This broken arrow I cling"..  has been my hope for many years.  Well done, nothing lost in the cryptic.
bb
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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8 posted 04-04-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lovely  
Denise
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9 posted 04-04-2000 12:18 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful!

Denise
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