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Overcast (a plea)
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Overcast (a plea) |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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Overcast(a plea) I'm always down, you say It seems you've failed your mission To bring me happieness To bring me to life I am a walking stoic With a heart of stone My soul a barren wasteland Better if left alone There's nothing you can do, you say To brighten up my life You feel helpless, useless Like nothing you say or do Will ever bring forth pleasure from this wretched soul of mine But obviously you don't or refuse to see Just how much you've rectified me I was in complete darkness You became my candle I was in absolute chaos You became my serenity Now this candle is burning out My serenity is dissipating And what can I do But sit by and watch As my life once again crumbles Into the choking fog I try to keep you wanting I try to keep you steady But what else can I do that I haven't done already You think you are nothing No help, no release at all But I'm pleading with you You must know this If anything else You're the one thats helped me The very most of all So don't give up just yet I'm down deep but I see a light It's hard for me to reach I need your shoulders to stand on And soon I will pull myself out If you would only help Don't leave me down here alone Don't walk away from me I'll get better, I promise Please, just stay with me here I really need the company Thank you for all you've done Although you think it's not enough It's more than what anyone has attempted to do It's more than I expected from you And I appreciate the boost I just hope you don't give in Prematurely I need you still Help me find myself I got lost along the way I know you know I'm hiding So I'm begging you to stay Just call out my name Offer me that strong shoulder to lean on And when you have fallen When you are in the depths as I I will be there with you With a smile on my face And words of encouragement And a warm hug just for you If you will just allow me To crawl out of this pit I can promise you that I will never forget All that you've done for me In all my neccessity And I will return the gesture Without any lecture. I'm greatful for you And the soul you possess Just be patient with me And I'll take care of the rest. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
A touching poem from your heart.I hope everything works out for you. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
One thing about overcast skies, they are never there to stay, when those clouds finally go sailing on the breezes, the sun comes out shining a little bit brighter and the air smelling a little bit cleaner. Hugs to you.. [This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 04-03-2000).] |
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Creperum New Member
since 2000-04-03
Posts 8 |
SorrowsMystress: This must be one lucky guy. Maybe he didn't realize that he really means this much to you. Maybe this guy has problems of his own as well. Maybe both of you are having problems communicating. Beautiful work. I like it alot. Makes me wonder how I can make things between us better. I love you. |
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