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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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I've tried to rationalize Tried to find answers But I come up empty handed You left me alone tonight I'm sure you didn't notice That you could make a person feel stranded I wanted to cry somehow But the tears would never come I guess I'm just not built that way I wanted to tell you That you hurt me somehow But I couldn't find the words to say You say I bring you down Like I mean for it to happen But I can't help the way that I'm feeling How can I get you to understand There's just so much going on And I'm searching for a way to start healing You mean the world to me And my world seems like it's crumbling It won't stop no matter what I try to say We seemed to be so right together The epitome of everlasting happieness Is that gone now, or just hidden away I've asked you to understand It's not you that makes me sad It's just that things are so complicated right now You make me smile when I shouldn't Made me believe when I couldn't And you've given me hope somehow So instead of understanding I'll ask you to have patience Please don't give up just yet I'll make it up to you if it's the very last thing I do I'll ensure you'll never have any regrets. I know I've asked a lot of you Just understand I need you now More than anything I've ever needed before Just stand by my side It will be over soon enough And nothing will come between us anymore. this isn't really that good, but it's still in the works. It's 3:43 in the am, and I just wrote it with a weary mind. (Unfortuanately writers block keeps me up at night) So please be gentle, this is a rough draft. Thank you. :/ |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***S M, I can relate to this poem so very much. There is no need for me to be gentle upon this great piece of writing at all. I hope you find your way. Welcome to Passions  I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Just stand by my side"..this is a place where I have found myself a few times. So true...this poem and life sometimes is full of complications. James |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
Not that good??!! This is brilliant! Don't do anything more to it, it doesn't need anymore work. I understand totally what you mean. I believe that if this person does leave you, you will be able to cope, it may be harder, but it is possible. I know that sometimes life is really tough and it looks like there's no way out of the situation you're in, but faith and persistance will see you through. Love & Hugs The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
There is a great deal of truth in this piece  |
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