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After Losing Our Litle Girl (For Lucky)

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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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We laugh together;
an easy laughter of tender devotion and care.
Delicately weaving and embroidering; securing the
splinters of our hearts lovingly back together.
A light aria of music quenching the desolate air;
~ ~ ~
Our laughter,
colorful and rich, flits like a hummingbird
across the hollow chasms of pained browns and grays;
cuts like a laser beam through the darkness
suspended ‘round us like thick blinding haze.
~ ~ ~
We laugh together;
for our tears often tremble
too close to the surface. So fragile it feels;
but we know our loving
laughter heals.


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 04-03-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Rosemary~
Great big hugs to you.
I so enjoy your work.
(and what are you feeding Lucky
these days?  His work has been awesome)
Big smiles in this corner of the world
at reading your beautiful work.
~*Marge*~


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Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 04-03-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

The beauty of your words rips at my heartstrings
Liz
CherylLynnMckee
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3 posted 04-03-2000 11:49 AM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

A touching poem...wonderful writing.

 
Songbird
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A beautiful poem that rings true, somethings people don't realize that laughter too can be a part of grieving. A healing salve that brings the grievers closer together.
Martie
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Rosemary, you weave magic in my heart with your poetry...it touches that place that understands.  Wonderful and touching poem!
Mike
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Wonderfully done.
Danny Holloway
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Loving laughter does heal, but hopefully, sharing will help the healing as well.
Beautifully written.
Healing hands of caring souls are reaching out to you.  
lucky
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Dearest Ducky

Oh how I know your heart... it's true the two have become one and no longer twine. All the loss, all the death, all the harry-carry of the living. 38yrs. in Sept. and I can still see the same spark. Of course it's a lot warmer now. LOL Dale & Rosemary Forever XXXOOO


 
WhtDove
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Your words are very gripping!
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