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amber
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los banos, ca,


0 posted 04-03-2000 02:58 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber


It's like a love I couldnt have seen,
Lost beneath my deepest dreams,
A kind that breaks and hurts me so,
Lies linger inside, to much to show.

It's like a time long before,
When I found myself standing at your door,
A smile and a heartache fading away,
Lost inside our yesterdays.

It's like a shadow of a doubt,
That turns my very soul about,
To face you in the sweetest way,
Regardless of the price to pay.

It's like a fairytale wrapped up tight,
Somewhere beneath my tears tonight,
Forming soft within your hands,
Swallowing whole, our cherished plans.

It's like an essence still and tired,
Cold and harsh, still worth my while,
A lessened pain would set me free,
Still this is where I choose to be.

Deep inside a fragrant love,
That I have asked for just enough,
To let us be here just as one,
Together forever, whatever comes.


 Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever>      Amber and Ellis forever and always




[This message has been edited by amber (edited 04-03-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
SorrowsMystress
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


1 posted 04-03-2000 03:09 AM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SorrowsMystress

I loved this one.......... Great use of emotion and it describes how I'm feeling at this very moment....(Don't tell anyone, but it also brought a tear or two up). Wonderful Job!
lucky
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since 01-17-2000
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Idaho


2 posted 04-03-2000 03:09 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

You little stinker,

Your one of the best there is. And yea know I just wanted you to (  ?  ) I saw you first. Good to see ya lassie, i've missed you.

 
TerryW
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since 03-23-2000
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Louisville, Mississippi, USA


3 posted 04-03-2000 03:32 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Lovely, Amber!
     Very Touching words.   I really enjoyed this one!    I will have to look for more of your work!


 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 04-03-2000 07:38 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Amber~
Good to see your sweet self
here with us.
Very nicely done, dear.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

amber
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since 06-15-99
Posts 246
los banos, ca,


5 posted 04-03-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thanks so much to all of you i havent had much time lately but thought i would share what i do with all of you.

Marge- thanks so muh i missed you to , tell your husband i said hello. Best wishes to you both.

Lucky- Very Cute, good to see you also. Nice to know that I've been missed!

Terry & Sorrow- Your compliments are very appreciated. I have been gone so long i have missed a lot of people that started writing. I'll try to catch up, Im sure you are both wonderful poets as is every one here.
Parker
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since 01-06-2000
Posts 3135
... the old black rum


6 posted 04-03-2000 06:24 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

amber, I really loved the flow of emotion. Absolutely beautiful poem.

Parker
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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7 posted 04-03-2000 08:47 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Amber
A touching piece with a lovely flow to it. I enjoyed it very much.


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
Michael
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8 posted 04-03-2000 08:53 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow... very strong poem, Amber.  Beautiful and very revealing.  Love indeed can be a strong price to pay but to hold it forever, well that is truly a dream... and would be well worth it.


Michael

devina
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Northern Cali


9 posted 04-04-2000 08:42 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I've missed you in here, my beautiful sister!!! This was as deep and heartfelt as yours go...you never disappoint!! Shall I call you "HUN" now??? Know you hate that!!!hehe Glad to see you keepin him in line too!!! HA

Love you!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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