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mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind

0 posted 2000-04-03 02:04 AM


~My Waking Breathe~


You are there holding me~
Holding my soul which weeps~
You grasp my pain, making it your own~
You caress my soul tenderly, lovingly~

You are there waking me~
Assurance to pain fleeting~
You kiss my brow slowly, gently~
Your love is my waking breathe~

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 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard




[This message has been edited by mariee66 (edited 04-03-2000).]

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SorrowsMystress
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up.
1 posted 2000-04-03 05:12 AM


Short but very sweet. I love this poem. I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to send it to my boyfriend (giving you full credit, of course). It totally expresses that wonderful yet sometimes complicated emotion we call love. Keep up the wonderful work, I will look for you on here often!
mete out
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2 posted 2000-04-03 06:51 AM


***mariee,
i love this. it is so delicate and touching.
you are a very lucky person...with huge talent.
well done.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.



Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-04-03 07:23 AM


Mariee~
Your heart is showing !  
I love this one.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
4 posted 2000-04-03 10:25 AM


SorrowsMystress~
Thanks for reading and enjoying it so much~
I'm flattered that you chose to send it to your beau  

mete out~
Thank you for you kind words  

Marge~
Thank you for always taking the time to read my poems~
You know I think you're the best  


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard



CherylLynnMckee
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5 posted 2000-04-03 12:10 PM


A touching poem straight from your heart...and into mine..lovely!

 

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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6 posted 2000-04-03 12:22 PM


A touch of love to soothe the heart and soul, so beautifully conveyed
Liz

mariee66
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since 2000-01-30
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Recess, OfYourMind
7 posted 2000-04-03 04:26 PM


CherylLynn~
Thank you... glad you liked it~

Liz~
Thank you for your comment~
Of course none of my work could compare to yours~  

Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard



TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
8 posted 2000-04-03 04:39 PM


Mariee,
     Indeed, dear girl, your heart is showing,  and I like what I see!   Very lovely, and straight from your warm and gentle heart!      

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Creperum
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9 posted 2000-04-03 04:45 PM


Very nice indeed!  BRAVO.   =)  

 

Michael
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10 posted 2000-04-03 08:57 PM


This is lovely.  Beautiful and romantic.


Michael

hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 2000-04-03 09:05 PM


Sort, sweet and oh so romantic  
mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
12 posted 2000-04-03 10:16 PM


Terry~
Of course you know I think your writing is devine~
I'm glad you read and liked my little poem~

Creperum~
Thank you very much~
And WELCOME to Passions~
Marie~

Michael~
Your poems are always beautiful~
Thanks for such a nice comment~

Hoot_Owl~
Your poems are works of art~
Thank you!~  

Marie~  
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 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard






[This message has been edited by mariee66 (edited 04-03-2000).]

Zelda
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since 2000-02-01
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NOVA
13 posted 2000-04-04 05:43 PM


Marie,
Randy must have been your muse for this one.
I hope the two of you work things out.
Beautiful sentiment in your poem.
Z

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