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My Waking Breathe

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mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind


0 posted 04-03-2000 02:04 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mariee66

~My Waking Breathe~


You are there holding me~
Holding my soul which weeps~
You grasp my pain, making it your own~
You caress my soul tenderly, lovingly~

You are there waking me~
Assurance to pain fleeting~
You kiss my brow slowly, gently~
Your love is my waking breathe~



 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard




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SorrowsMystress
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1 posted 04-03-2000 05:12 AM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SorrowsMystress

Short but very sweet. I love this poem. I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to send it to my boyfriend (giving you full credit, of course). It totally expresses that wonderful yet sometimes complicated emotion we call love. Keep up the wonderful work, I will look for you on here often!
mete out
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2 posted 04-03-2000 06:51 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***mariee,
i love this. it is so delicate and touching.
you are a very lucky person...with huge talent.
well done.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 04-03-2000 07:23 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mariee~
Your heart is showing !  
I love this one.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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mariee66
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SorrowsMystress~
Thanks for reading and enjoying it so much~
I'm flattered that you chose to send it to your beau  

mete out~
Thank you for you kind words  

Marge~
Thank you for always taking the time to read my poems~
You know I think you're the best  


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


CherylLynnMckee
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5 posted 04-03-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

A touching poem straight from your heart...and into mine..lovely!

 
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 04-03-2000 12:22 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A touch of love to soothe the heart and soul, so beautifully conveyed
Liz
mariee66
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7 posted 04-03-2000 04:26 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

CherylLynn~
Thank you... glad you liked it~

Liz~
Thank you for your comment~
Of course none of my work could compare to yours~  

Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


TerryW
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8 posted 04-03-2000 04:39 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Mariee,
     Indeed, dear girl, your heart is showing,  and I like what I see!   Very lovely, and straight from your warm and gentle heart!      

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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9 posted 04-03-2000 04:45 PM       View Profile for Creperum   Email Creperum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Creperum

Very nice indeed!  BRAVO.   =)  

 
Michael
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10 posted 04-03-2000 08:57 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

This is lovely.  Beautiful and romantic.


Michael
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11 posted 04-03-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Sort, sweet and oh so romantic  
mariee66
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12 posted 04-03-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Terry~
Of course you know I think your writing is devine~
I'm glad you read and liked my little poem~

Creperum~
Thank you very much~
And WELCOME to Passions~
Marie~

Michael~
Your poems are always beautiful~
Thanks for such a nice comment~

Hoot_Owl~
Your poems are works of art~
Thank you!~  

Marie~  


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard






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Zelda
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13 posted 04-04-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

Marie,
Randy must have been your muse for this one.
I hope the two of you work things out.
Beautiful sentiment in your poem.
Z
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