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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


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You  Drops
~~~


Blue  drops
keep  forming  in  my  eyes
Those  'You'  drops
keep  falling  from  my  head
Crying  now  you  see's
a  constant  thing  for  me
Since  you  got  me  peeling  onions
burned  my  eyes
from  blue  to   red
~
Red  eyes
slowly  burn  their  way
to  dead  eyes
And  never  again  you'll  see
these  bloodshot  sunken  two  eyes
gazing  tenderly  at  you
~~~


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!





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Ah, this is so sad, Rex  

Denise
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Rex**
This is Great...sad and touching as well.  You have done an awesome job sharing the gift that you have...thank you!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

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Rex, sad and creative ... I had to smile at your style.  

~ Claire
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4 posted 04-02-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Rex~ my friend~
You've been in the kitchen too long !
So comical .. 'er sad !
You are a delight.
~*Marge*~


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Thankyou everyone for the kind replies
sorry to sound so short on thanks but I'm sort of pressed for time all of a sudden
... did a show this weekend and two more coming up this month ... e-mailed to death
and several meetings to attend
Not sure when I'll find time to get back
so Happy Easter everyone

Rex}>{{{{o>
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Oh Rex Allen--now may I have YOUR autograph?
loved this, sad but compelling. EXCELLENT.
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Don't be away long, Rex - we need your entertaining work here... This is a good'n..
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