navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #6 » ~ You Drops ~...........................just dusting}>{{{{o>
Open Poetry #6
Post A Reply Post New Topic ~ You Drops ~...........................just dusting}>{{{{o> Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2000-04-02 10:48 PM


You  Drops
~~~


Blue  drops
keep  forming  in  my  eyes
Those  'You'  drops
keep  falling  from  my  head
Crying  now  you  see's
a  constant  thing  for  me
Since  you  got  me  peeling  onions
burned  my  eyes
from  blue  to   red
~
Red  eyes
slowly  burn  their  way
to  dead  eyes
And  never  again  you'll  see
these  bloodshot  sunken  two  eyes
gazing  tenderly  at  you
~~~
< !signature-->

 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!





[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-03-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-04-02 10:56 PM


Ah, this is so sad, Rex  

Denise

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
2 posted 2000-04-02 11:11 PM



Rex**
This is Great...sad and touching as well.  You have done an awesome job sharing the gift that you have...thank you!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


Meadowmuse
Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

3 posted 2000-04-02 11:13 PM


Rex, sad and creative ... I had to smile at your style.  

~ Claire

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2000-04-02 11:21 PM


Rex~ my friend~
You've been in the kitchen too long !
So comical .. 'er sad !
You are a delight.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
5 posted 2000-04-03 11:57 PM


Thankyou everyone for the kind replies
sorry to sound so short on thanks but I'm sort of pressed for time all of a sudden
... did a show this weekend and two more coming up this month ... e-mailed to death
and several meetings to attend
Not sure when I'll find time to get back
so Happy Easter everyone

Rex}>{{{{o>

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-04-04 01:11 AM


Oh Rex Allen--now may I have YOUR autograph?
loved this, sad but compelling. EXCELLENT.

Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
7 posted 2000-04-04 07:30 AM


Don't be away long, Rex - we need your entertaining work here... This is a good'n..
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #6 » ~ You Drops ~...........................just dusting}>{{{{o>

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary