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You Walk Away (What am I saying????)

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HM3
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0 posted 04-02-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for HM3   Email HM3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HM3

You walk away so easily
It's so hard to watch you go
You say "I love you" so breezily
That my heart will never know

Was it love, was it more than I deserved
Is it guilt from years gone by
A friendship so worn and reserved
Steadfast you stood and watched me cry

Then walked away so easily
Leaving me to find my own
Saying "I love you" so breezily
A lost love I had never known

Is it love, is it more than I deserve
Is it guilt from years gone by
A friendship so worn and reserved
Breaking you stood and watched me cry

Still you walk away so easily
Me, I can hardly say goodbye
You say "I love you" so breezily
Is this the day your love again will die

Is it the difference between you and me
Is it in the way that we give
Am I  to you what you are to me
Or is it just the way it is



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1 posted 04-02-2000 06:24 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~HM3~

i could really "feel" this poem! i know what it feels like to have someone say " i love you" and they act like they are talking about the weather or something. the word LOVE is very powerful and should be used with caution. love is different to everyone but should never be said with haste or such lightness. beautiful work you have here, excellent job. i look forward to reading some more of your work. take care

AMY S M I L E!    

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2 posted 04-02-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

HM3--good work here. There are some things that are so hard to figure out.

Elizabeth


 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

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