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Nate Dogg
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0 posted 04-02-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg


Springtime is realy my favorite season
because it's work on earth is quite pleasing.
You can tell that springtime is here
by the flowers scent in the air.

The essence of spring is resounding
as the pollen count is mounting.
The birds are chirping with happiness
as the skies shine with a peaceful bliss.

The grass and trees grow greener in the spring
and the flowers some alive to sing.
The temperatures rise a bit higher
as the sun shines a bit brighter.

All of the bodies of water become clearer
as they sparkle like sunshine in a mirror.
The earth morphs into a beautiful garden
everytime spring decides to beg it's pardon.


 Nathan
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Denise
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1 posted 04-02-2000 03:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome back, Nate! I missed you, buddy! This is absolutely beautiful!! You have captured the very essence of Spring in your words! This is my favorite of yours to date!! So beautiful!! I especially love the last line!!  

Denise
Nate Dogg
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2 posted 04-02-2000 04:06 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you Denise, I've been very busy lately and I haven't had the chane to post. I 'm glad that you liked my piece and I'm glad to see someone really missing my presence on this board.

 Nathan
JamesMichael
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3 posted 04-02-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very expressive Nate..a fresh touch of spring.  James
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 04-02-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Refreshing poem of spring, exactly the topic of my next post. We're all thinking in the same direction. This is very lovely, Nate.
Liz
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5 posted 04-02-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

I like it a lot!!!!!
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 04-02-2000 08:54 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Nate~
You've been sorely missed.
Glad you've dropped in.
Love to see your smiling face.

This is the prettiest piece I've
seen you do .... talks to my heart.

'The earth morphs into a beautiful garden
everytime spring decides to beg it's pardon'
That line is just awesome.
Bouquets for such a lovely piece.


What a refreshing look at Spring you've
given this lady.  Thank you.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



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CherylLynnMckee
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7 posted 04-02-2000 09:01 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Lovely poem.. a feast for the eyes! Wonderful.

 
Nate Dogg
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8 posted 04-07-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Ohh, you all have bought joy to my eyes!!
Marge, you are such a doll!! God bless you!!
Thank you James, Liz, Vandanna, and Cheryl for your nice comments.

 Nathan
Martie
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9 posted 04-07-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

What a lovely poem to spring.
Nate Dogg
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10 posted 04-16-2000 03:52 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you Martie for you nice comments.


 Nathan
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