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In The Eye Of The Beholder

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hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


25 posted 04-02-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Thank you everyone and as much as I fought my muse on this one, I'm glad He/she didn't steer me wrong  
mariee66
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since 01-30-2000
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Recess, OfYourMind


26 posted 04-03-2000 01:48 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

I've read quite a few of your poems, though I don't always post a reply (don't always have time)~

Anyway, I wanted you to know that I think you have a wonderful talent~

This piece, as odd as you think it to be, was beautiful~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


lucky
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27 posted 04-03-2000 02:20 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Wow, Wow, Wow, Hay wait just a minute, I thought it was going to be "twit steals love..." and then of all things it's real love. you got a catchy little pen.

 
SorrowsMystress
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


28 posted 04-03-2000 05:27 AM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SorrowsMystress

With as much devestation in marriages nowadays, it's difficult to find poetry with such a happy ending....believe me, it was a great relief. It brings a lot of hope to this soul of mine to think that there is probably still marriages out there like this. I truly, truly loved this poem, and will share with many of my married friends who are wary of pretty girls and their husbands. Good work is an understatement!  
TerryW
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since 03-23-2000
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Louisville, Mississippi, USA


29 posted 04-03-2000 10:16 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Ruth,
    You never cease to amaze me.  I love the mood changes in this one!    






 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


30 posted 04-03-2000 10:35 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Thank you everyone  
Corazon
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31 posted 04-03-2000 11:43 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

this is wonderful hoot, brought a smile, for all the loves that "should be" and are  
thanks
pmc
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since 03-09-2000
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Germany


32 posted 04-04-2000 11:12 AM       View Profile for pmc   Email pmc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pmc

Hello
I liked the first one so I looked and found another.
Its better still.

pmc
CMGrimm
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33 posted 04-04-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Ruth, this is simply amazing.  I remember sometime back you persuaded me to contact a publisher for a couple of particular pieces...well...now it is my turn.  Ruth you definitely should get this one off into the hands of an agent/publisher.  This is exceptional work.  Wonderful feeling throughout, and a great story to boot.  thanks for a great read.

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

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on the threshold of a dream


34 posted 04-04-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Hoot: I'm glad you didn't ignore your muse. *S* This is fantastic.... enjoyed it much!
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